Reviews for Holding Up the River
Riku's-Way-to-the-Dawn chapter 5 . 4/20/2011
This is a really sweet story. There are a couple of grammatical errors here and there but I like how you've developed the characters and the pacing is really smooth. This is one of the best Sora pov's that I've read in a long time. I realize it's been a while since you've updated but it would be really nice if you continued this story. It would be such a shame to waste it. Please continue if you have the time.

~Riku
Shwoky chapter 5 . 9/7/2010
To be continued..? That was over a year ago now! I loved this entire thing, I feel like it's the perfect what-came-next story and I want so much more, as soon as I can read it.

I want Sora to tell his whole story to his friends, and I want to see their reactions to him gliding places. I want it to end with the King coming back, or with that message in a bottle telling them about the new threat or the island being invaded or anything because I just want to read more of this story.

tl;dr mor plz
puregarnet chapter 5 . 6/3/2010
Gosh, THIS is what I want the kingdom hearts fanfiction to be about! All the complication that are supposed to happen at the end of kingdom hearts 2. Their parents, school, rumors, what Kairi told everyone about their disappearance, how do they fit in again and all sorts of other stuff. Please continue, this story is so nice!

puregarnet;D
Reginleifthevalkyrie chapter 5 . 3/22/2010
Hello. Are you still in the fandom? If so, it'd be lovely if you could find your muse and continue. -giant RiKaiRa nerd-
leenarietto chapter 5 . 11/22/2009
Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next!

It's a really interesting story, so please continue it!

I must say that it's one of the best KH stories I've ever read. The characters are just the way they should be, almost if I was playing the game! :D The whole plot is interesting and when I'm reading it I keep on thinking that it could be an actual continuation of the game itself! Amazing! :D

So pretty please update it soon. Oh and I promise to comment every chapter from now on.

I really like it!
Doom Squirrel chapter 5 . 11/7/2009
This story is really great. It's a realistic look at what Sora's life after returning to the islands could be like. I feel sorry for his parents, but at the same time I empathize with his frustration.

The buildup for the romance is going nicely, too. Smooth and gradual, and easy to believe. (Riku! Stop being stupid! You don't have to cut yourself out of their life just because you think there's not a place for you!)

Looking forward to more!
Wehiner chapter 5 . 10/18/2009
UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story. I love that it takes place in cannon. All I want now is more of it!
FifthDayOfMay chapter 5 . 10/18/2009
Dude! This is freaking awesome, I love it so go write more soon mkay? XD Eiku should just kidnapp the two of them so all three can get cozy, if ya know what i mean yo. XD
Apprentice chapter 5 . 10/18/2009
I know the answer to Sora's question! Riku belongs right alongside them, maybe force feeding the two of them Paopu fruit. XD I love this story, write more soon, I wanna see the three of them together and happy.
NiccyC chapter 5 . 9/14/2009
I'm here via Asuka, who reced it on her LJ.

I just want to say that I'm loving this story! It flows on from the end of the game perfectly, and you've got the characters spot on in my opinion.

Looking forward to an update _
Lady Andromeda Black chapter 5 . 8/14/2009
Looking forward to seeing this story updated.
Adel Mortescryche chapter 5 . 8/10/2009
Honestly one of the more beautiful and realistic KHII compliant stories I've read. I especially love the way you managed to stay true to everyone's character, the story, and yet managed to weave in so much *more* that had been unsaid before, like what happened to the islands after Sora and Riku left, the reactions that people had, the possibility of their friends and aquaintances becoming heartless, the confusion Sora feels with regard to Riku and Kairi, his attraction towards both even though he's unable to name it, and the overall feel of normal life with a backdrop of all the crazy things Sora had to face to get back to it.

Interestingly enough, this is also the first ever RikuSoraKairi story I'm reading. 0.o I've read enough of those three paired together in various couplings with each other, though, so I'm waiting to see how you handle putting them in a threesome. What I've seen so far in the story is really making me look forward to it.

Well, not much more I can say right now, and feel as though I've ranted enough. Eheh... sorry about that. At any rate, can't wait till the next update!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 5 . 7/3/2009
Poor Sora... Locked in the house like that would drive me NUTS!

Good luck with that question, Sora...

Well written! Great read! Keep it up!
Ghost Writer no. 3 chapter 5 . 7/3/2009
*Claps and all that good stuff* YES! I love it when this idea is dealt with and you do it nice with that last line.
AppleCoreCandyBox chapter 5 . 7/3/2009
Oh, I just can't wait to see what happens next! I can't help but feel a sense of forboding in the air. I mean, it's all very good and I love the way you've written this story, but I'm somewhat nervous for what might happen. I want everything to turn out alright, but I can also see how so much could go wrong, you know?

Anyways, enough of my ramblings. Awesome story so far, loving it to the max, and I can't wait to see what you plan to do with it next!

-ACCB

P.S.: I love that you write long chapters. LOVE it.
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