Reviews for The Perils of Alphabetical Seating
beianzhen chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
This was really good. Kinda wish there was more.
Rosy-Fingered-Dawn chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
Really good and understated:)

-Rosy
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side.
thecanadian13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I must admit to see the dasey relationship take a back seat to normal, somewhat cannon friendship. It also made me laugh when Max mentioned UBC. It's so weird to see ones university in a fanfiction XD
Mae Snapdragon chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
"Hell, Derek most likely believed that the whole world wanted Casey as much as he did."

That. Line. Made my life. So true.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
That was fun to read.

I like the dynamic between Casey and Derek plus the little observations that Max had.

I realized in the grad episode, they weren't in alphabetical order, aren't they usually?
Kathrynzala chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I loved this story. I first read it quite a while ago, but whenever I'm in my Life With Derek mood, I come to this story and read it to myself.

Even if Max did sometimes seem like 'Captain Cardboard', you did a great job portraying him as a human and that he's moved on from Casey. This was an interesting perspective to view the story from. The insertion of a mother who downplays Max's spacing problem and refers to him as 'sweetie' is icing on the cake that had me laughing.

One thing I noted was that you used "said" too often. I reccomend varying to things like "exclaimed", "asked", "inquired", whatever floats your boat. And in some interactions, we don't need he said and she said, because there are only two people involved and it isn't necessary. In such a situation, it merely detracts from the story.

But anyway, still LOVING it. Even the title is just made of win.
mayfair22 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I didn't just recently run into this fic, I have had it in my favourite list for quite some time now. but I was going over this again because I'm looking towards writing about a few 'neglected' characters and this story takes the cake for it. it's one shot and yet I think it's epic. it really is one of the best in the entire fandom. awesome stuff, so in character..all of them
silver tears and wasted fears chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
where did u get the prompt from?
2whak4wrds chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Wow.

I have not been very involved in the fanfiction world for quite a while, but I loved your story.

Like not just that it had a good plotline, but I loved your writing style.

You should consider being an author, 'cause you're super talented : )

I enjoyed it so much, and I LOVE MAX.

: )
hushhushyou chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
Aw this was really well written! It really fit the prompt too. I like seeing Max in a new light. Because even though I had maybe.. said once or twice.. that I hated Max, you did him justice in this story and it had me thinking of how judgmental I was towards him and that was wrong of me! He really isn't bad, he just wasn't right for Casey. They should remain friends though and I liked that you made an opportunity for them to be. Anyway, I really liked the Dasey hints you threw out there too! Loved it :] They're going to college together, I just can't get over that xD! The LWD writers are killing me here hah. Oh and I wanted to mention how I really liked seeing the view point of Dasey from Max because I always wondered how he would react or think of them and this story gave a good impression on how he probably would have seen it. I hope Max finds a great girl! Hah. And I loved this story _
dainty character chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
It was different and i liked it. 8/10
jeytonlover chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I knew I loved you for a reason! Of course, it's no secret that I don't hate Max. I did kill him off (it was totally necessary for plot purposes) but I toally made him a good guy, dead or not.

This was amazing. Your way with words and characterization never ceases to amaze me. Don't some day it will somehow seep into me through osmosis!

You are the master and we all bow down in humbleness!

Plus I noticed for some crazy reason, you aren't on my favorites? I have no idea how such an injustice occurred but it is now remedied!
LorMenari chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
This was great. I, unlike most Dasey shippers, actually like Max. Sure, his character was written a little shallow but he always meant well. I remember, before I found a love for Dasey, when Max showed up in Casey's room thinking it was the bathroom, I was in love.

You did such a good job putting Max in a better light than he usually is in. Brava.

-C

p.s. love love the Dasey-ness :D
MaybeBaby27 chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
Justice has been had! I LOVE LOVE LOVE how you wrote Max. Most people just write him as a total airhead and I think you captured him perfectly. He's simple minded, not stupid. A little oblivious sometimes too.

I loved the small Dasey hints and the simple yet awesomeness that is this fic.
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