I am Twilight neutral, but this was beautiful!

Amazing. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

Oh god, that is excellent

Edward, sorry for the typo.

Edward. Sorry about the typo. I'm on my phone.

Fuck. Twilight would be so much better if you wrote it. You somehow made dewar and Bella's love truly meaningful, and give Bella more character development in a one shot than Stephanie Meyer did in four books. Thank you. That was beautiful.

That is a much better love story, then the so called love story. It feels realistic

I saw the PotO, but thought it was an accident. -_- Guess I should stop second-guessing my recs.

This was an unexpected turn, and it makes me like this Edward and Bella. Nicely done.

I came here from your youtube acount (as I'm sure at least a few others did) and I found this breath taking. I'm not a Twilight person at all. I have never read the books. Haven't even touched one in fact, but if this was how the books actually were then I would have read them, and they probably would have ended up on my favorites list. I liked how you gave Bella so much personality. How you characterized her made her sound like someone I (a girl in her early teens) would want to look up to.

Similar dialogue that actually makes sense.

That is, indeed, the skin of a killer. I'm glad that instead of sparkles, it's more or less a monster. And you really can see that Bella doesn't just want to know Edward physically.

Oh. my. goodness. That was breath taking and you know what? It was better than the actual book. This was so deep and emotional and I think you are totally right about the 'Phantom of the Opera' tidbit at the end. Great work! Question, do you write stories on Fanfiction's sister site FictionPress? If you do I would REALLY love to read your stories.

Hello.

I came over from YouTube (like a majority of people, probably), and I found this...to be amazing. I enjoy how you worked in Phantom of the Opera (Erik is amazing, no doubt about such a thing), and I do love how you made this feel like an actual story, rather than some "fluffy amazing fantasy."

Good job.

-Beyond Birthday Forever

This is brilliant!

Lol, I founded you on Youtube and saw that you had a fanfiction account! :D And this scene was so meaningful and creative if I do say so myself! Though, I don't like Twilight...