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You shoulld make it as a STORY not just a oneshot next you should write how she comes back and finds him there.. waiting for her,

But we don't need carbon dioxide, therefore we don't need Jacob Black. Awesome story!

~Xela

lol did you know that we actually need carbon dioxide more then oxygen? my anatomy teacher told me that. so i guess jacob is better lmao

I liked it! I loved that she learned to play the lullaby; that is a great touch.

that was totally sad... brought me to tears. ha ha and i like your friend's joke!

wow that was really powerful. are you going to continue it? you should!

Ha ha ha. Nice. Like the joke at the end (author's note). Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

It's great! The emotion in it, the way you wrote it. It's perfect! Without a doubt one of the best sad one-shots I've ever read. Good job, girl!

Hey, I really love this oneshot! Thanks for writing it!

i really really like this. u should make it into an actual story.

i loved it!

i love these kind of storys where edward never came back nad she was changed. this basically summed in up in one shot!

good work and keep writing you are really good!

peace out!

incoherant reality.

This was great, I loved it, first story I read in 2009. I hope you will continue this, at least one more chapter. I would love to see her return. :) Please.

LOL..I like your friend's joke. Great chp, BTW

Awe gee whiz. I can understand a little on running 'all eyes' on her...if she wasn't used to all that kind of attention...it would feel weird...and then Edward coming to her so fast...or was it?

..but can't she come back soon? I mean I know they have eternity...but soo many years of misunderstanding and messed up thinking...a brain is a terrible thing to waste...and their's are sure in a mess. Please!

What made them come back?

caww