Omg, this fic was amazing and beautiful. I loved it. Thanks!

I found a few mistakes, but they didn't distract from the story. I loved Hades and Persephone together, and the take on their relationship was refreshing.

Loved this!

Haha! I love this, I like the idea that Persephone is always eager to get back to the Underworld and it makes sense too. :D

Very interesting, love it 3

I definitely enjoyed this.. Hades putting up a front like that seem in character for me.. It was only natural that Persephone would be caught up in it.. xD Demeter was also acting like a normal mother probably do so it's awesome..
These two teasing each other was so cute and sweet..

CUTE!

A interesting take on the myth. Very well done in beig able to portray Persephone as being detached from the life around her and not responding. It made many people question why she is acting as such and Demeter really went with different conclusions. I find it amusing that Demeter would blame Hades for the innocence that Persephone had is now lost because of him. Really can't believe that she wouldn't expect some kind of change from her daughter after being moved away for so long now. She migh interact differently now, bu her love to Hades is real if no one else can see it but only for the two to see. Dry romantic when they got back together and the longing they had for each other. Beautiful at the ending as they let heir true selves be revealed between the two rather than others to watch. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Awesoem

I love the range of emotions this fic has. At first a little angsty and misunderstood, then sweet and passionate, and then that final line of Charon's-ha!
I adore happy Persephone/Hades fics, and this one is definitely one of the best.
Merci bien for this lovely piece!
-Ritz

very intresting, i loved the last little bit with charon

Interesting and fun. Thank you.

I absolutely adore this. You write beautifully, plus the rare category and point of view of the fic... Magnificent.

This story is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you describe Hades and Persephone together, the way you evoke the feelings of longing that those six months apart inspire. I also like that they’re very private in their love, that they don’t flaunt it for everyone to see. There’s something very respectable about that.

Also, the idea that Demeter would dress Persephone as though she were a sacrifice heading down to the Underworld seems absolutely spot on.

I think this sentence was my favorite, though: “She longed to have the golden threads of her life forever entwined with his own strong dark ones until the world that they reigned over crumbled into dust and their glory faded into the dusty annals of myth and legend.” It evokes a bittersweet melancholy and it’s great.

Loved it!

Great well done