Me encantó tu historia y el comportamiento de Naru ja ja ja

I just happen to read Chapter 7 on 1st April! Lol talk about weird coincidences :D Nicely written. So far am enjoying the story

But as far as I'm concerned he's not. He is always giving her orders for her own good. He cares he just doesn't know how to interact correctly because Gene used to be the outgoing one.

Anyway I liked it, showing his care in his thoughts which are never shown in the Anime.

(Reader note:SAN SAN SAN SAN SAN SAN!)

Lol , I now just noticed the poke ball from the picture!

THIS IS AMAZING OH MY GOSH!ILOVE IT!

I really liked your story. It was very well written and all the characters were in character so extra kudos to you. One thing that really botherd me though was thar there was no transistion between scenes. It got pretty confusing. I suggest useing a line break of some sorts. That would improve the whole story. You are an excellent writer. Keep it up.

Lol love your writings!

Don't be sad! I reviewed :D are you happy now ? :3

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Naru without tea isnt a happy ghosty hunter " is this how you want my life to end mai xD"

Christmas is fine. Put some parts are funny some have drama :0 Some are epic *which is the thing I don't know if its on this chapter or not SNOW OH MY GOD MAI LETS GO PLAY! XDXDXDXDXD that was awesome!

OMG OMG LIN 'SMILED' OMG ITS THE END OF THE WORLD AS WE KNOW IT!"!* my friend stares at me as if I'm drunk* Ahem its good and... * is about to yell something crazy but my friend covers my mouth* He ,means to say that its really good...Really good keep it up!

I day said NOT he's just being weird XD We still love him though its cute he's jelly that mai is wearing monks shirt :3 its normal for a teenage boy to get jelly... I think... Well keep up the good work

THIS IS SOOOOOOO FUNNY THAT PART THAT PART XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD " And that what crack does to you kids " XD XD XD can't stop laughing!

I loved your story