definitivamente no se que decir de este fic esta impresionante-mente increíble muy diferente a todos los que he leído y debo decir que me encanta es tan duro y cruel en cierta forma que me eriza los pelos se supone que el juego debería trasmitir esto pero no logra ni una pisca pero vos me haces hasta asustarme guau.

sin mencionar que detallas todo tan bien que es como ver una película y se esta poniendo tan bueno que de todo corazón por favor continua la historia, se merece un final epico como lo fue el juego.

perdona si escribo en español pero es que leo el fic con el traductor de google xd, y aun que entiendo ingles no se hablarlo ni escribirlo.

I think its awesome, do you have any way to download this novel?

Yay! Two moons! xD

There are a few little blips in the writing here and there, but those can be easily fixed.

Oh wow, the Imperial army invades! How exciting! How sad it is that Terra got so ill. I totally didn't expect Madeline to abandon Terra like that. /sadsad

I know there's a missing chapter before this one, but thankfully everything seems to have been explained in this one. (I do hope you can recover the last chapter sometime in the future)

Nice job writing

I like how Terra is portrayed in this She's so curious and sweet.

I also like Locke's accent. It makes him seem cool, yet laid back. More family drama llamas Heehee, this story is very interesting I am enjoying how fatherly Maduin is being. Over-protective characters are great Again, good job!

Oh dear, family drama! Poor little Terra, she's so cute. And I hope Aether will finally get along with his father. Good job so far!

Welly well, this is certainly interesting. I keep wondering what will happen next, and how everything turns out. Nice job so far. I saw a few little mistakes here and there, but it does not hinder the reader. On to the next chapter!

nice, nice novelization...

please, continue it :D

cool story

Ops! That last review was for chapter 33, this one is for chapter 1 :)

Personally, I like that you are so kind enough to teach someone English and I really, really like your writing, but it was probably not needed to add all that "Beginer" stuff. You could always make a separate story .

Either way, it is still good :)

Aw, poor Eddie! I feel so bad for him!

I hope he can overcome his guilt long enough to help Terra and his friends :)

Great chappy! Update soon!

This is pretty good! I hope you make another chapter.

And the only errors I found were a few grammar mistakes, like "adn" instead of "and". But it was a great chapter ;)

I really liked the part when Terra was morphing. Most people make her like a cat, but I can see why you picked a dog. Amano gave Esper Terra a puppy nose :)

*very cute*

I saw a few mistakes, like a sentence beginning with: "The young kind stood up" you might want to fix that .

If I don't count the grammar errors, this was almost perfect. I like it when you do longer chapters. But this is still really good, so I hope you make another.

Please update! I'm gonna go read the other novels I can find too.

Hmm, interesting! I'd have to see how the next chapter goes before I decide to read the whole thing. Your writing is good, but may I suggest something? I don't mean to be rude, but...if you need help with someone to check over your stuff for grammar mistakes, I can do it for you. I'll message you if you want.

Anyway, this is good, so keep it up!

Oh wow! I didn't know I didn't fav you or have you on alert yet! I'm sorry about that!

Since I started later than other readers, I'm just getting to chapter 20-23. But I did read the new chapter, it is fantastic. I'll have to read the previous chapters to understand what is going on though...

Update soon!

Hiya and thanks for updating your story!

I really enjoy your writing and how you give a better detailed summary of the game, it makes it last longer. I can see why there are people who support Edgar and Terra, throughout the game (I can give facts, despite me not liking the couple) Edgar shows the most concern for Terra; Tritorch fight, bridge, after the fight at Tritorch, Zozo - if you bring him - when you find Terra again and almost every time you bring him.

Although I support her with Locke, even I can see the evidence behind the couple. Stabs Edgar so Locke has a chance*

Well, I enjoyed the chapter either way, so here is hoping to another chapter, champ.