Reviews for Bad girl
OblivionKisame chapter 6 . 10/31/2019
This probably is how Kim would be if she good she would be a lot like Shego because they are already a lot like.
Bobtrumpet chapter 6 . 8/30/2016
Nice twist to some canon. Enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2015
I Like this story; Kim Being amoral Yet still fighting against villians, Is actually more like something kim would do if she were bad, She'd be uninterested in villiany, She'd just finish off ALL Villians and she's like bonnie if She were a Anti-Hero! Bad Boy is MY Favorite Episode of Kim Possible, and Seeing a what-if if it weren't drakken and Ron that switched Moralities, But Shego and Kim! WOW!
loonytunecrazy chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
Another exllcnet chapter here cool job with Kim bad girl
loonytunecrazy chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Intresting start here
JEGO chapter 6 . 2/5/2010
yawn average remake of BAD boy
Batamut chapter 6 . 5/18/2009
Very well done I can totally see that happening but with a little more aggression on Kim's feelings for Ron since she no longer cares about her image which is one of the two big reasons they didn't get together sooner(as I see it)

Are you going to try another switch what happens fic how about switching to Kim and Ron in Emotion Sickness so that they both have the Emotion chip.
Dgxuruend chapter 6 . 1/26/2009
he he funny
Six-string Samurai chapter 6 . 1/10/2009
Hm, it still feels kind of abrupt, but if taken as an episode length story, it works. I do look forward to reading future stories from you. Take it easy, and keep on writing. Good luck.
Data Seeker chapter 6 . 1/10/2009
Dear Reader101w

OK, I won’t make a big deal about the word in the other chapter since it’s a real missile. At least it wasn’t something worse.

Nice little epilogue; featuring Kim and Ron. In my opinion, it was rushed and lack detail (like there should have been a Shego/Drakken confrontation, and Kim not remembering her evil self was unimpressive. Maybe her memories should have slowly returned and recalled what happened to Bonnie).

The moment with Shawn and then Bonnie was funny too.

The wholesome standards are high. Nothing is offensive.

I hope you like this review, even though its critical. God bless.

Data Seeker
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 6 . 1/9/2009
Very good ending! And yeah, Ron should tell Kim all the stuff she did as a 'bad girl'.

Keep the good writing.
Worker72 chapter 6 . 1/9/2009
It's a pity this story is so short. At least we don't have to worry about tie constraints or S&P on fanfiction.
screaming phoenix chapter 6 . 1/9/2009
Augh! I wanted to know just what Kim did to Bonnie when she was evil, a flying Kung fu wedgie perhaps?

Nicely done here, hope to read more from you.
Six-string Samurai chapter 5 . 1/8/2009
There were a ton of minor spelling errors all through this last chapter...mostly 'to' mixed up for 'too,' 'of' for 'off.' That sort of thing. Easily missed and easier to fix.

I think the story itself, like the episode it is tangent from, is a little too brief, but you're behind the wheel, so that's up to you. I wouldn't go as far as to say this is a wasted opportunity, but rather an interesting point of experience for you on your road as a writer. Keep plugging away and I am looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up.

- Six-string Samurai
Data Seeker chapter 5 . 1/8/2009
Dear Reader101w

Nice little update. Its rushed and lacks detail, but its good.

The following scenes are interesting. An evil Kim is more of a ruthless thrill seeking vigilante then a hero. This is an unexpected, but interesting plot twist.

The scenes with Ron, Shego and Wade are good. The parts with Director Betty are good.

The confrontation with Ron and Evil Kim was unique; I really like how Ron appealed to Kim and Kim hesitates, torn by her evil and her friendship with Ron (has drama and emotion, even though the chapter is rushed) then Shego restores her.

Nice twist. Now Shego wants payback on Drakken for dumping her.

The wholesome standards are pretty high; though one word concerns me. Will you please change it?

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker
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