Nice read!

aww. that was so cute. Great job!

until next time,

coreymon77

speechless! 8 minutes huh! well who keeps track of time when you with someone you love. I loved this one shot

I loved this! Great job. (: Wow, making out for 8 minutes...GO CHUCK! xD Haha, so much for a little kiss, huh? xD Great job; I loved this. (:

Angelica

I did like the form. I also liked the word choice you used for your story. Well done.

This is a breathtaking story... maddening as well. I spent several hours trying to hone down the viewpoint. The earlier part of the fic screams to me Chuck, but as we move on, it seems more and more like Sarah. Either way, an excellent piece. One of your best, by far. Ambiguous viewpoint is a fun idea to play with. There's a thin line to walk with something like this between brilliance and blandness. You walk it very well. There seem (to me) to be parts of the story that chip a little under scrutiny when analyzed from one character or the other, but it's still a fine piece overall.

4*/5*

OMG! This was so cute! I was totally grinning by the end of the story. So well written. Awesome job!

That was cute.

Beautifully written.

Love it!

Very nice, Arathorn. I liked the ambiguous POV - it is like a puzzle while you are reading it - and the kiss was smoking hot! Thanks!

Geez, Louise! 8 minutes! What a great read, A. I initially took it to be from the CB perspective, but after a re-read I can see how it could be from Sarah's view as well.

Can't wait for more... keep up the good work. Stuff like this makes the winter hiatus easier to take. LOL

If only this would happen on the show. It would be so cool. Great job.

Nice chapter.

I like it.

i love this! :P

I love the style of having an unidentified POV-personally, I thought of it as Sarah talking. Great job.

(8 minutes? That's... 480 seconds! That's a long time)