Reviews for Fever
Lovetoright chapter 5 . 11/16/2019
I love this story but your long authors notes are so annoying. I write on fanfic and I’m ok with flames and all that and this isn’t a flame per say it’s jsut do you have to make your authors notes so damn long. They take up half of the page and lots of scrolling.
smiley1999 chapter 9 . 9/4/2019
u need to take the comment responses out of the chapters they make you not want to read the story
SinUn chapter 7 . 9/4/2019
Good story except it's the poster child for why Not to review. Half a chapter on responses to reviews? That's when PMs are meant to be used.
Luminous Kushina chapter 13 . 7/31/2019
The funny thing is that this fanfic is older than me xP
Yet it will always be one of my favourites
Guest chapter 10 . 7/14/2019
It's so good
Guest chapter 13 . 7/14/2019
I am in love with this fanfiction. It was the best harry potter fanfiction I have ever seen. Keep up good work
SceneQuiverBroad chapter 11 . 4/4/2019
That was Sirius practising! I thought Dumbledore was actually there.
InkTheDemon chapter 8 . 3/19/2019
Hey author,
I love the story but can you please, PLEASE, PLEASE LORD FIX THE UNDERLINES! Not to be rude, but you're killing me here! It's just... ugh! It's really annoying for some reason. Like, if it was occasional, I could ignore it, but my Lord... It's just really annoying me, can you please fix it? Sorry for ranting.
eeminxs chapter 13 . 3/16/2019
Awesome fiction! Just wish Sirius had gotten the rights to adopt :(...they need each other so much and are great together. Thanks for writing this.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/8/2018
You keep on doing Remes lupin instead.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/15/2018
Annnnnnd, that's it...wonderful. (completely sarcastic)
Book girl fan chapter 6 . 3/20/2018
Yeah, I don’t think Sirius is going to take that lightly.
MoonLitReader chapter 13 . 12/27/2017
I liked this
Guest chapter 13 . 11/22/2017
Soooooooo good!
eetje020 chapter 13 . 7/16/2017
Hello

Ik Just Read your story today. And i really like it, sorry i was wondering if you ever made a sequel from the story.
Bye bye
Eetje020
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