Nice work

WOW! Freaking amazing! You're understanding of the characters and how to handle this subject made for a fantastic read. You developed these characters in ways that I haven't read before. Great job! :)

Funny, this is the Piz we saw in the movie so not so OOC after all. Granted, he had a right to be upset when she cancelled meeting his parents but Piz has always been passive/aggressive in my opinion. Plus, you're spot on with him thinking he was better for her than Logan, which is idiotic. Not a Piz fan, in case you couldn't tell. ;) This is great.

Wow! That was a very powerful VM addition.

Excellent.

I liked it. You did a great job of showing piz as wrong without making Veronica or Logan look like they were the bad guys. Question: when does Logan call Veronica "Ronnie"? I thought only Dick called her that.

Like this one shot. :)

I loved this story!

I always disliked piz. Never should have been put with veronica, the writers messed up there and that helped end the series imo. He was better as the dorky friend and they should have explored more logan and and veronica along with mysteries, they should have explored logans abuse and it was disgusting that she went back to Duncan I'm season 2. Big mistake IMO. I loved the show but those thing kinda made me not as enthusiastic about it.

I always wanted Piz to know that she wasn't the woman he had built up in his head. thanks for that

I really enjoyed this. I think this fit pretty well with Piz's character actually. I think one of the big issues with S3 and Piz is that he did not and could never understand what Veronica and everyone else had been through. He really had not clue. I think you did a good job of showing off his insecurities here, which I really liked.

I also loved seeing Veronica trust Logan the way she did. Thank you for writing.

You have a beautiful way with words my friend

Oh, this one is good. I don't think Piz was OOC, because in all honesty, we have no idea how he would react at different type of situations: 20 episodes of watching him as a supporting character don't really equal to knowing him that well. "You think you know somebody", etc, etc.

On other note, I usually hate it when Wallace blabs out Veronica's most private secret (which I've seen in fics that deal with Piz's understanding LoVe relationship), I always want to scream at the writers that he could never ever betray Veronica in such a way. That being said, thanks A LOT for building Wallace/Piz conversation in a way you did, because with him being all worked up and everything, I totally believe and understand his outburst, it is a necessity even. So thanks for making them all alive and real.

And those beer cups and soda cans moments? Just perfect. Just so THEM. You don't need too much words to explain why they are epic when you have a detail like that.

Good story but a little OC. Veronica was a bit too hard on Piz. It makes sense he would get mad after she doesn't explain why she gives her drinks to Logan. I feel really bad for him, he doesn't know the he'll she's been though. He's a normal guy, a sweet nice nerdy guy. Calling him small town and comparing him to Logan was a little too cruel for me. But I like the premise. Thnx for the read.

This was fantastic! I loved it. Piz came off as an idiot, but I also think that you got his characterization really down, as well as for the rest of them. I feel a bit bad for him, because really he just didn't know and who can compete with the awesomeness that is LoVe? lol. Again great story.