I love this story for Liz Patty and Kid

Seriously! All I could think about this last one was that everyone was being an ass to Kid. He deserves to be PISSED! They fucking took down his house!
Anyways, I still loved these one-shots. Great job with them. :D

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i would be soooooooooooooooooooooo mad ahahaha!

Aaaaaw poor Kid XD Those brats who fought dirty should have all of their bones break and all their incomes taken to repair Kid's home! In fact, take all Sid's income away as well!

BWHAHAHAH I LUVVV THIS STORY! Lol the cinnamon rolls R CALLING U KID! Lol great work, I totally enjoyed reading this, and the fact that I'm reading this at 6 am just makes it a bit more interesting (long story there) Anyway great job *throws confetti in the air* keep up the great work

a generally good story, but i loathe the ending to this chap. so, i wrote a rage fic about it. if you want to see, go to my profile. you'll know which one it is. i'm very sorry.

Absolutely adored this story. Kid was painful and amazing, and the Thompsons were just as gratuitously understand as he never deserves them to be. I despised the One Star Meisters (A good thing; I rarely feel much about stories, and it feels good to hate the nemeses of this piece) and loved your portrayal of Sid and the Reaper.

Really glad you wrote this, and looking forward to poring over your other works of fiction.

AAA

I loved the story! It was a lot deeper and more detailed than the anime or manga but totally realistic and believable. Usually I like Liz with Death the Kid but Patty and Kid turned out to be cute too! I love your writing style )

Just one thing: HOW IS THIS RATED K? (maybe you should change that)

Write on,

SilverRose

I really love how you handle all of the characters and their quirks. These stories were especially cute with Death and Kid's relationship, and I love the connection with the internal baking clock between the two chapters. I also really love how you handle Kid's obsession. You make it seem very real and unavoidable, and not just a comic relief type of thing.

Since I can't comment on the last one, and I would make them pay for the items they destroyed. Sorry, I LOVE YOUR STORIES BTW!

If I was him, I would've beat the fuck out of them at school, then probably locked them in a ditch full of hobo shit and piss, then break most of their bones, then finally tell them that's what they get for fighting dirty, then kick them out CAUSE HE CAN(After all, he is Shinigami-sama's son).

I've read and re-read this story. It is, in my mind, amid the best examples of the kid/patty/liz dynamic anywhere. Well worded, well executed and brilliantly done.

"Sometimes they got new ones. Sometimes the old ones went away without being replaced by new ones, at least not for a while. There were always some times that were better than others. These things tended to go in cycles."

I don't know if you have OCD, but I do, and this is a VERY accurate description of what it's like with tics and obsessions. Actually, this entire chapter is a wonderful portrayal of OCD in general, and how it can get better as time goes on, but how it can still come back occasionally. Good job!

Oh wow this chapter was adorable.

Wow... that was just epic. That last chapter with the kids stealing Kid's mask blew me away. I've read through a lot of stories on this site, and I've seen a lot of writers do romance and character studies well, but this the first time I've seen action done well. :) I was conflicted - do I root for Kid or the one-stars (who, by the way, didn't not bother me as OCs - this is how you insert new characters into canon in a good way)? Those kids really did fight smart, and their victory was well-deserved. It was awesome!