I would give my left kidney for this story to be finished.

Beautiful story! You're depiction of the characters are amazing & the flow of the story is really good! i do hope you continue, in the meantime i'll be reading your other works :)

this is literally the best mello/oc/matt fic that i've read & i'm so sad that you aren't continuing it :(

Hello!

I swear to God-for the love of all that is chocolate and smells of cigarettes- PLEASE UPDATE. You have me entirely hooked to this story, and I am ultimately LOVING - and I mean LOVING - the love triangle, the angst, and the complete sense of the story! I finished this in two hours just sitting around on my desk and I didn't even realize that there were only twelve chapters until I couldn't hit the "next chapter" button anymore xD!

But anyway, I absolutely adore this story. ADORE, Ya hear me? XD I love the fact that there is an overall sense of reality and complete understanding of the characters! No sweet, or incredibly sappy moments in between the characters that completety take away their characterization and instead make it OOC like other stories I have read. You, my friend, are a GENIUS (Are you sure you don't have L's brain backing up your story? Lolz jk)! And the plot. Omg, the setting of how your story is placed and how Bea's and the storyline clicks into place is PERFECT. And Bea, omg BEA. She is wonderful, complex, and almost simple at the same time. The way her emotions are portrayed from beginning to now shows a lot of great development in her character and her relationships with Matt and Mello. I also really like the fact that her complex relationship with Mello is so drastic and just downright filled with so much more than a stereotypical desire to explore out of her caged lifestyle and have a "bad boy" at her side. No, it shows her struggling with herself, Mello, Matt, and let's not forget about the Kira case here.

By the way, are you going to make Mello and Matt live? Please - *gets down on knees - PLEASE SEMPAI. I cannot imagine this story with their tragic end. What will become of Beatrice and Mello? Argggg there are so many things to still think about! That is, if you are still going to continue this story. But those are only my opinions. Truthfully, I'm 100% sure that any ending that you will (if you are still active) conjure will be amazing and very satisfying.

Anyways, this story is awesome. The characters are awesome. Your OC is awesome. You are awesome. Thank you for letting me read such an amazing Mello story that incorporates all types of complex, and thank god that I managed to stumble upon this story.

*runs away to read your other stories*

Cheers,
Panda musume

Loving the story! Are you gonna continue it?

I remember when I first read this story, I fell in love with it instantly! It's a shame it was never continued :c

Aw this is so good! Her relationship is so twisted with Mello yet I love it, but I also sort of love her with Matt as well. Please please please update soon!

Ohh Snap! This is interesting! Update!

Hiya :D
Looks like your on a major writer's block :(
I've been checking your fic almost everyday to see if you've updated or not.
You really really need to continue writing this story, it's amazing :'D
Please come back.

Scarlett xx

Amazing story so far! Can't wait for more. Love the way you portray Mello and Matt. Please update when you get the time!

I WANNA KNOW WHAT MATT SAID! Oh an lovely story btw! I can't decide who I like her with better!

Please update soon!

I absolutely LOVE the angst you've written into this story. It's flawless D PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Amazing story, but you really need to update! Please update, this story is amazing, even if you have made me fall in love with Matt :D

Please continue with this story :)

why has it been so long since you've updates this, lady?

it's great. c':

i hope you decide to continue it sometime~

Wonderful, i hope that this is not the ending, ill have you know this is my first matt and mellow oc fanfic and i will not lie to you i am not finding anothet, they can not give me what you did, seriois talent girl use it to continue and make me...no all of the mellowxbeaxmatt fans out there, please!