Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

Oh I wish there was more. I didn't want it to end, it was so great and wonderful!

Wonderful insight into Mara! I love this story!

How can I review after that? Im bawling my eyes out. What a great start, can't wait to read what happens next. So much emotion and heartbreak!

I read this story a while back and have come back to read again, I enjoyed it so much.

i found this on some one else profile and i like it evan though it like a couple of years old lol

Just found this story and I really love it. :)

*From author* Thank you all for the wonderful reviews through the past few years! After an absence of such long duration, I have lost my pen-name and cannot even remember what my password might have been.

I have now returned under the pen-name "Ariade" and plan to begin writing anew! I look forward to your continued readership and reviews!

Absolutely beautiful. So well written. I only hope to find more treasures in your acrhives. I am so encouraged by your writing... the style is so flawless. I enjoyed every word.

This was wonderful. You have some real talent

I really loved your story. It was a joy to read, all the complex emotions were just beautifully written. I couldn't have asked for a better Mara/Luke romantic fanfiction. I hope you write more like it.
~Your Worshipfulness

aw how sweet!

i always thought it went a bit fast in votf. thanks for your rendition of the tale. i liked it

Just one word... beatifull

You have a definite way with descriptions of conflicting emotions. I felt like I was on a rollercoaster. Just the way I imagined their relationship to be-at the beginning especially. I hope you write some more stories. I'm certainly going to be watching for them!