The best saito fix I read, also I liked about the mask of kenshin because I always think of him like that, However I like to dig more on his life as a hitokiri and also Tomoe

I hope you continue this unique story

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Hey,
I don't know where you stand regarding this, but I have to say that it is an impressive piece of work.
Kenshin's a dear, with good instincts and his reaction to Tokio is hilarious.
To gather all of them under the same roof is a great idea. And the historical research and flashbacks made this story incredibly interesting.
Cheers !

oh my goodness, we are so close! SO CLOSE! ibhope that you are well and one day finish this amazing story. I know it will make many people happy. much love to you ~cheers!

i really do love contrasting timelines that pay as much attention to the characters history as well as their present. that said, I'm so heart wrenchly sad.

this... this was nothing like what i expected. how utterly depressing. how terribly tragic. what is this abysmal tale I've gotten myself into? goodness i hope theres a happy ending. i have to believe!

Any chance of an update?

Wow just wow. I read both rules of engagement and this in 2 days. Beautifully written. Pls don't stop

Great fic! and to leave on such a cliff hanger! I really enjoy how in character everyone is, and the insight into both Saitou's and Tokio's mindsets.

Thank you very much for a wonderful update. Really enjoyed the boys' little discussion about Tokio (the part that begins with "She's probably hunting him down as we speak"). You have me wondering who is going to catch the culprits first, the women or the men. Looking forward to the next installment!

Thank goodness! You finally updated! '-'
Please be encouraged to continue!

This was an amazing chapter, and I'm really glad to see this story continued! I really just love the way you write the characters, and Tokio is great. :)

I was so pleased to see that this story was updated! I was so worried that it would never receive another chapter. And such a good chapter too! Saitou's anguish and guilt over...everything... is delicately and brilliantly done. But he's still a little smarter than Tokio gives him credit for.

Loooove this story, I'm glad that you are still updating it. The fact that Tokio has such a strong personality that can make most men cautious while still being a woman of grace makes me happy. That being said, I both hate and love the ongoing tension between her and Saito. I love it because it would actually happen and you are writing it out very well, but hate it because I just want to smack Saito and say he's and idiot...x'D which would not go well for me at all...

Anyhow, keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait to read more

Since I already used up my review space for the later chapters, I thought I'd drop by on this one and remind you that this story is still not finished and I am eagerly and hopefully awaiting an update. Also, about this chapter, I love, absolutely love, Kenshin and Tokio's conversation at the beginning of this chapter. Every time I read I almost hurt myself stifling giggles. Run away, Kenshin, run far far away, the scary, not-a-bodhisattva is plotting . Every time I reread, I fall more in love with this story. Please don't leave it unfinished!

You really would think the gentlemen would have learnt better by now. It's great to see this continuing.