Reviews for Between the Lines
The Path of Supreme Conquest chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
You already own it.
This is lovely.
bonsaitree chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
First, one thing I want to comment on is all the ellipses in the letter. I've always thought: well, even if that's what and how the person is thinking at the moment, he or she wouldn't write it down like that. I'd imagine he/she would go over, rewriting it many times, scratching things out...but I don't think they would actually write down their own stuttering.

Now that that's out of the way...

Wow...Peter and Edmund's love for each other knows no bounds. I think that came across very clearly. In shovelfuls. Oh, this was heart-wrenching, just like all the other "brotherfics" I've read from you. I've always had a soft spot for brother relationships and your stories are a perfect way to indulge. (:
So, thanks very much for writing!
Sleepyreader13 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I realize that this is quite a while after you published this, but seeing as how I just found this beautiful piece of work, I don't really have an excuse. This was warming and heart-wrenching at the very same time.

Like I said, beautiful.

Characterization was very very well done, if not nigh on perfect. I loved it.

X Sleepyreader13
sarlovesoccer chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Wow... I always thought of Edmund studying law, but this gives me a new perscpective (if I spelled that right).

I can't wait to read more of your work.:D
He's No Angel chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Beautiful beautiful luv Peter is beautiful for Edmund
Berserker Nightwitch chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
So sweet! Thank you for writing this! The emotion in your stories is almost overwhelming without ever seeming trite or overdone. Thank you!
InLoveWithAFairytale chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
*screams*

I officially love these two characters!

And this story!

And the other stories of yours I have read!

You know what? Imna add you to fave authors D

Hehe, that is how much I like the three stories of yours that I've read D

I may seem hyper / But I have an excuse! 'Tis my birthday today! D

So me reading this story is sort of a present XD

Keep it up!
Rebel S2 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
("I'm not innocent! I've never been innocent, Peter! You should know that better than anyone!")

Oh, God, Ed…whatever it is you're thinking, stop it right now.

("How is it that even in a letter you can know what I'm thinking?" moaned.)

that lines was completely priceless! this story was awesome! I've read a lot of your fanfics about the brothers and they are all really good! your an amazing writer!
bookwyrm.the chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Alright, altogether now... AW! So cute and brotherly! I love it!
NightRise chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
aw
me chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Thank u! i nevr get 2 review stories cuz they all make it where u nee member i dont wanna write stories just read them! this waz rlly good i loved it the whole he can tell what im thinking from a letter thing made me laugh unfortuately i didnt have a teddy bear or tissues with me cuz i normally dont cry during these stories are keyboards supposed 2 get wet? mine is covered in tears cuz i didnt have tissues thank u so very much 4 writin this the writer always thanks the reviewer 4 reviewing but i like to thank the writer 4 writing the stories because they dont have 2 share their stories o crap im babbling now arent i? well blame people who dont let me review their stories i nevr get 2 review stories soo wen i can i go on forever no they dont let me anyway great story plz write more and thanks again

sum1 who isnt a member but should be cuz then they could review
LadyoftheShield chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
“How is it that even in a letter you can know what I’m thinking?”

Cause he's you brother you twit.

I know I said I wouldn't say this but-

STOP BEING SO BRILLIANT
RandomDream chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
:) As cute as its prequel.

Thanks.
whydontyouletmedelete chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
wow! how breathtaking. I adore your brotherfics!
Artemis1000 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Lovely, so lovely!
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