I really enjoyed this. You use great imagery and have a strong vocabulary, which I always appreciate. As a criticsm, sometimes your first person perspective is a little awkward (though those moments are few and far between) and the Hamlet scenario kind of pulled me from the story... I think you should quote the play without any explanation and just mark it so that you can later use a disclaimer... So what if it's in Hamlet? I think it fits the story well, so I would just let it go. _ Other than that, awesome job.

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Oh yipe that was incredibly dark! That was really really sad... Um... I'm going to go mope now. (P.S. VERY well written. I liked this a lot. Slash forever! Yay! Well... Slash ain't so cool when it's ME going after them... but still...)

Excellent! I love how Harry came back like that _

Interesting. And so very Draco.

Excellent..Your characterizations are right on! Good job!

Wow, that piece was pretty amazing. You've got a lot of talent and I hope you'll keep on writing! I agree with Mr/Ms. Incitata that the ending was nice... showing that Harry *can* rely on his own self and powers to save himself. It was also sweet how Harry waited until the very last moment to see if Draco would redeem himself. Wonderfully done~!

lol thats excellent! i love the way u used hamlet to backup dracos reasonig and i hope u keep writing!

Wow. This story has class, you know what I'm saying? You can present dark thoughts in such a way that you would actually feel the anger, even though it is not slewed with dirty words or with naughty thoughts. Brilliance! Write more, please.

Daahh! Good always conquers... Why was I rooting for Draco? Probably because it was in his PoV. I must take this opportunity to applaud you. *applauds* This is the first actual good HP fic I've seen on this site for a LONG time! I love it! And I love how you, too, think that Harry would make a great dark wizard... (check out my fic, "A Matter of Time" if you like... it's not my best, but it's the dark wizard thing). This is just so great. When I saw the word "supine" at the beginning, I knew that your fic was no ordinary fic from this site... I really loved it! *stalks off suddenly to clean the sand off of car... don't ask...*

Bravo! Very tightly written. You portrayed a marvelously bitter Draco railing against what has led him to be where he is; on the losing side yet determined to turn it to his advantage. A man seekeing neither forgiveness nor redemption. The twist at the end was nice, it implies that it was not merely his mothers love that saved Harry from Voldemort.