I'm reviewing before I even start reading this because I went and searched out Skeletons and just finished reading that. Wow. It was haunting, in the best possible way. You did justice to BA, a character that is hard to write and often over looked. I actually cried when BA gave Face the ring at the end, even though I knew it was coming. Thank you for such a moving story!

Oh man, that was fantastic. Your writting is pristine. You have the characters down to a tee, and you are so talented. Thank you!

Lovely story. I love friendship fics and BA and Face don't get a lot of stories together. It was also a nice exploration of each character and how such two different people could become friends (and why they needed a little push).

This was such a good story I loved how you set it up. There was plenty of action and some well written male bonding! The end made me smile! Nice work.

Just read this on the recommendation of a friend. Well worth the time. So many good moments. So many. But when BA realized the Scotch run was for him, for his momma...I died.

This is a wonderful story! I love it!

Fantastic story! I loved it!

Awesome fic. I so enjoyed your h/c and the way BA is being enlightened about Face.

this was a fantasic story! i read it end to end with the greatest delight. you really nailed the characters, how absolutely amazing. big congrats on this, you did an awesome job!

That is a great great story, it really is. It involves everything it needs to be great, some fun, some sad moments, some bonding, a lot of suspnese, and some Face whumpage, and all of that written in a very good style. I just totally love it.

Really well done, I like how you dealt with the characters and the probable friction of first meeting. The touch of the scotch being for BA to visit his mama was perfect :)

Hey, that was a very good story!

Gripping.

I like how you tell the tale of Face getting his nickname.

And BA who finally drops his prejudices.

Excellent writting!

That seemed so like Face not wanting to say he was hurt. And tiring to get a pass for BA to see his mom.

I loved how BA and Face were yelling at each. Its so like them. Especially with BA calling him sucka.

There emotion in the jungle you captured them so well.

Incredible. I told my friends about this story and they were convinced that it was a real war story! It provoked some tears from all of us and left us feeling as though we had been right there with them experiencing all the grief and such! Soon I hope to join and post a story of my own, and would be honored if you would be willing to critique it when the time comes! Seriously, your story is one of the few extremely good a-team fan fictions on here! I have nothing else to except STAY ON THE JAZZ! :)

This is a great view of the early stages of the relationship between BA and Face. I liked the way you switched the points of view but kept the "voices" of each character distinct. I loved the ending!