Earth's dragon balls don't have a restriction on bringing back someone who had already been brought back. They have a restriction on granting the same wish twice. And no, that doesn't involve other dragon balls in any way, it means shenron can't grant a wish shenron has already granted. And your restriction on porunga with one year isn't very good either. He is much more powerful than shenron.

future cell is wack

Nakill

This is very weird... Gohan is extremely OOC and he wouldn’t give even Cell that many insults and harsh treatment despite the circumstances and transformation so is Dende since he would never have the courage to speak to Cell like that no matter what.
I am getting annoyed with how EVERYONE has an iq of OVER 9,000 (I wanted to add some humor) and is suddenly a philosophist and especially how you pretty much jammed about three wishes into one wish and then did the same for the next wish which was far more ooc for Shen-Long to agree to than anything else in this. Why does Cell have an entire essay worth of dialogue every time he opens his mouth.

I will admit that you kept Vegeta in character very well and also stated fine with the rest of the Z-Fighters and it was especially smart that you had Goku become the one that sort of forced it on everyone. I am trying to give this fic a chance but I’m really wondering why it is receiving such high praise and how it earned a TV Tropes page of its own.

I will continue reading this to see what I think but I really think you are being too extra with all this dialogue.

I have read the first chapter and I have to say... wow! That was a very interesting route to go with Cell and I am very interested in seeing how this turns out.

If there is one con it would be, Goku does not use big words like that he is very informal when he speaks and he doesn’t speak like that

I’ve heard enough about this fic and seen the TV Tropes page and I give in, I’ll finally read this, cannot wait to give my reaction to it.

I think definitely Frieza would make the best businessman. He already is actually what with the whole selling planets thing. Piccolo could be as well I guess.

"Unfortunately, with the hopeful exception of Vegeta, no one has yet taken us up on this offer.

Piccolo

heck Tien and Yamaha were both killers before getting together with Goku.

Why would cell need a freaking space suit... he has frieza genes

Interesting.

Holy shit, there’s so much fucking dialogue in this story. The dialogue stretches out for way too long, because all of the characters talk “smart” for some reason and use these big ass words to show off how smart mr American Vigor is. Goku is fucking brainlet. Why does he talk like he’s a lawyer of philosopher? Same with all the characters, they sound so robotic. The Z Fighters in behavior, are extremely casual. The fact that your so dead set on making them sound “smart”, makes them sound less casual. Like in chap 3 when Yamcha says something about using the dragon balls to become filthy rich. Trunks replies. “that’s quite inappropriate.”

Ew. Just ew. Trunks wouldn’t say that. Maybe he would, but it wouldn’t be phrased as wordily as possible.

Im sorry but i have to stop reading cell should not have been absorbed into another cell. After the wishes bulma should have built a time machine and sent cell back to the present and more importantly back to CANON and have the 7 year time skip to get to buu and then on to super not all this bullshit with the future and the space time continuum. also your chapters and sentences just keep going,

As a small request, die.

As a small request, please give your good Cell a Golden Form.

Why would cell need a space suit he has frieza and king colds cells which would allow him to breath and survive in the vacuum of space.