| Reviews for A Deep Breath and a Heartbeat |
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   liverno chapter 1 . 8/13/2019 Wow incredible |
| BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 3/29/2011 A great story. Very well written. |
| xxPsychicSocksxx chapter 1 . 9/5/2009 Great, completely beleivable. |
| XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 1 . 2/16/2009 That is so wasome I can't even tell you how I feel... |
| Realynn8 chapter 1 . 1/21/2009 I loved it, very well written. Characters captured perfectly. Well done. |
| Elinzanine Rosette chapter 1 . 1/2/2009 perfect. You really captured Alice and Jasper |
| HalfBloodHannah chapter 1 . 12/28/2008 that was really nice. :) |
| TypoKween chapter 1 . 12/27/2008 I love that Jalice always has to be touching. You do know that you are on the verge of making me join a new fandom, right? LOL! This was a cute oneshot and like I said before having it in Edwards POV is total originality. You rule chica. ;) |
| justawritier chapter 1 . 12/26/2008 really cute :) |
| Bojangles78 chapter 1 . 12/26/2008 That was so good! Happy New Year for a few days' time :) |
