Reviews for Heavily Broken
genn160 chapter 21 . 3/19/2010
so i know u finished this a realyy long time ago, but i loved it! it had so much emotion, i was crying reading the last chapter! this was a great story : ) you've got talent! haha ]
nileyfan1 chapter 21 . 1/2/2010
even though this story is really sad and depressing and makes me want to cry i still love it its cool how you put so much emotion into it
BurningRose FrostingDesire chapter 21 . 11/27/2009
awesome story :) really sad but great work...
eemily5 chapter 4 . 11/16/2009
OMG that was so unexpected!

i was,like,what?
eemily5 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
oh god!

that is the first story i read here in fan fiction and it is amazing!

of course i got into this site because of your stories..

i am a youtube fan of yours so...yeah really good and sweet!
XoXoNiLeY2010 chapter 21 . 8/6/2009
WHOA! loved it! it was really sad, but it was great to see them help each other throughout! You're an awesome writer btw :D

please make a sequel!

xoxo

btw i love your youtube stories too :D
DeepSeaFanglyFish chapter 21 . 8/5/2009
Awh. I totally did not know you finished this, sorry I bugged you with my review to Shy. lol. I hope you do write a sequel! :)
airunn yo chapter 4 . 8/5/2009
oh my gosh, i almost started crying from the thought of Joe killing himself :'( that's so sad
elleyse wesley chapter 21 . 8/1/2009
I love this story its the best. The past few chapters were really sad I even cried a bit. I do like the ending and I think you should do a sequel to see how there relationship goes on. I feel really bad for them. But it seems that as long as they have each other they would be okay. And I'm really proud of Nick's mother forgiving Lily and Miley I hope that she makes it though this. I knew that Lily wouldn't able take the pain and the guilt anymore it would get to her in some shape or form maybe she would do drugs or drink I never saw suicide but it was good. I know that it would be really hard for anyone to take.I love all your story's your a real good writer you should make so more please make more of this story and add another sequel. I wonder if Miley is pregnant by her rapist and if so will her and Nick make it though that kind of thing. Plus will Miley ever see her family that is alive again. Why don't they ever contact her. So many questions so please answer them its killing me inside.

MAKE MORE PLEASE !
Shannon chapter 21 . 8/1/2009
OMG! I cried at the end of the story. I loved how you ended it. It was perfect. You need to win an award of some sort. Like seriously that was perfect.

-Shay
noxrest chapter 21 . 7/28/2009
I cried, that was a sad story.

i love how you ended it too :)
lilibosslady chapter 21 . 7/27/2009
omigosh i was crying the whole time i can't belive Lily is gone that was so awsome in a sad way nice ending just like your stories on youtube amazing!
XMusicEmotional chapter 21 . 7/24/2009
Wow I cried a little because I just lost my grandpa a few months ago.
niley4ever08 chapter 21 . 7/16/2009
that was supa good! i kant believe its over! i hope there is another sequel!
Lnriley96 chapter 21 . 7/10/2009
Wow amazing ending. I'm sorry it took so long! When I was at the part with Frankie talking to Joe and Lily I just stopped bc I was crying so bad. I procastinated reading it untill now and even now I'm still crying my butt off. But I loved it to death. One of the sadest but greatest stories I've ever read. Can't wait for next "heavily broken" or other awesome story you come out with.

-Nicole
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