I'm actually wondering something, how come it's discontinued if it's only the first chapter?

This story is great, I want to know what happens next.

why is lee so creepy?

I like this story. plz continue it! I don't mind Hina-chan and the others being OOC! I love that stuff! I hate it when great stories end up being discontinued!

PLEase continue with your awesome work and make more chapters

A really good start

Oh... I like it... You should update soon!

hi i just wanted to say this was a ge8 story and id really like it if u do another Chapter *gets on hand an knees* oh please

o-o i LOVE it if u involved sakura gawd i love to hate that pink-b*tch (dont kill me if ur a fan)

il b looking 4ward to ur other stuff:)

i like it mis-sama :D

Okay, since I know nothing about Naruto, I'm just going to give you a few, general tips.

Your dialogue is completely off. When you end dialogue, you need to put a comma. Example:

"Hi, my name is Feign," said the girl.

However, the rule does not apply if you use an exclamation point or a question mark. Example:

"Hi, my name is Feign!" said the girl.

"Hi, my name is Feign. What's yours?" said the girl.

Also, when you are writing her thoughts, if you put them in italics, you don't need apostrophes before and after.

Okay, last thing. Well, the last thing I'll mention right now, at least.

When you are directly adressing a person, such as saying, "Come on, Name here, hurry up!" you need commas before and after if it's in the middle of a sentence. If it's at the beginning, you only need one after the noun. If it's at the end, you only need one before the noun.

And always remember your ending puncutation!

Feigning My Innocence.

This seems really cool. Can't wait for you to update.

Its interesting and I'm a sucker for the whole bad guy and shy girl pairing as well as Gaara/Hinata. I don't have any ideas as of yet but i'm sure by the next chappie i will.

Update soon please :D

wow, lee was about to kill Hinata. This was pretty good.

her prayers were ansered

It sounds intresting!

But Gaara is a POSER ...well he sounded like that when you said he dressed like a punk/bad boy when hes a prep... P

Sorry Mostly when they say that in our school there really wimps but who cares its GAARA!

I love the little running thing they did...shows how childish they are P

UPDATE SOON