Great fic

I love how Jellal was portrayed in this. He wasn’t a mad psychopath that some people think him to be. Everything about him was justifiable. I personally think there was no flaw with his character. I loved it, thank you for the amazing piece of art. I love how there was a little bit of Natsu in it as well.

And that seems about right, Erza would regret everything she’d say to him. But then she would parade herself back into his arms.

Ha that was awesome. You definately need to develop it more

Amazing.

Oh wow this was just epic. Even though the actual story turned out far different this was interesting as well.

Your Fairy Tail fics are amazing! :)

Wow. This was a gorgeous Jerza fic. The angst and Erza's indecisiveness and ah GOD the FEELS... beautifully written, so keep it up!

Great story :)

Good writing. I liked the ending a lot.

I love the darkness of this pairing, how it had become complicated and twisted after Jeral had been brainwashed. You really captured it well.

I love it when you write about these two - it's almost haunting.

Perfectly written!

Wow. This was amazing and well written. Great story!

Nice fic, you can feel her confusion.

This was refreshing and different compared to a lot of the fanfics I've read for this pairing. At least in this one it's not explicitly stated whether she loves or hates him. You left it for the reader to decide, instead of ordering us how to think of it. I think that's really great.

I truly enjoyed this, despite the typos. This is actually my second time reading it. I understood the emotional contexts better this time around, now that I've read until the end of the Nirvana arc. Although, you published this long before that arc occurred...