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   MiniNinjaPanda chapter 16 . 8/31/2013 Great story! I love it! You must update! I have to know what happens! What happened to the dad? Roses? What was up with that weird fever? WHAT IS SHE?!... |
| Alexstarlight18 chapter 16 . 2/22/2013 Ahhhhhhhhhhh! When are you going to update ! This is such a great story , I want to know what happens next! Please please please please please please please update soooooooooooooooooon! |
| Regin chapter 16 . 10/2/2012 I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon! |
| FallenSlayer17 chapter 16 . 2/16/2010 ilove your story i want to find out what happens next! it is written very well and the story flows along great but pluse update soon. |
| party.animal.123 chapter 16 . 1/25/2010 Wow! This is an incredible story! This story requires more credit (and reviews) than what it already has... it is amazing! I hope that you can update soon, I am curious to see what happens next. Keep up the good work, Janelle. :) |
| xNadiiLiciiOus chapter 16 . 12/31/2009 Omg I began reading ur story today and finished it! I can't believe u have only 55 reviews(now 56). This story needs way more reviews! & u have to continue writing! Please tell me you didn't stop writing the story? |
| Honeydew42 chapter 12 . 11/13/2009 There's Jacob! He wasn't in school so I assumed he wouldn't show. |
| Honeydew42 chapter 1 . 8/25/2009 I made an account just so I could ask you to continue the story as soon as possible. At a convenient time for you of course. But I really do love the story and I wonder how Demetri came across the Cullens. You really would do a great job as an author and I want the Twilight Saga to continue and I think you are doing a wonderful job! Keep it up, and I will wait as patiently as possible for the rest of the story. . . I can't wait to know more about Adalia's past holds, and why the vampire is after her. Please, please, please continue as soon as possible. Thank you for what I've read so far and I can't wait to read the rest. . . I also wonder why Adalia's blood doesn't appeal to Demetri like other blood and I can't wait to find out why her life was spared in the forest the night her most of her family was killed. . . Or even why her family was killed? :) I really will try to wait patiently but I can't wait! |
| Kellbella chapter 16 . 8/12/2009 Hey Jenna, I am so excited that you finally posted your chapter. That being said, lets get on with the review. Whoa, that was a very intense chapter indeed. I felt so sorry for Demetri. It seemed as if he ripped open an old wound and bled it dry while telling her about how he was turned. It was horrible and shocking, by his own dad. Your descriptions were wonderful. I could picture where he lived with his mom in Italy and picture him telling his story. I was mostly focused on Demetri this chapter. He risked a lot in telling her all of that. Wow her blood smells like roses, very interesting. Is that only Demetri or all the vampires? Could that be why she was spared that day when she was with her mom, sister, and brother in the woods? I am dying to find out what happens next. I assume the baddie is Demetri's dad and when will he show up? And what happened to her dad? Is he okay? Okay those questions seem demanding, sorry. I will wait patietly. :) Great job. |
| wrestlenascargirl chapter 16 . 8/11/2009 i love this story. please continue soon. |
| TwilightEclps chapter 16 . 8/6/2009 More please! :) |
| TwilightEclps chapter 15 . 6/17/2009 More! I love it! :) |
| wrestlenascargirl chapter 15 . 5/12/2009 i love this story. keep up the great work and update soon! |
| booklover15 chapter 15 . 5/9/2009 wow reeli reli amazing plz plz plz plz plz update asap! x |
| NayaFan chapter 15 . 4/21/2009 wow, great story, happy belated birthday! |
