this was another great story from you, but it honestly doesn't hold a candle to Tossing Stones. I really want you to continue that one :D so this one was just kind of a way to read more of your work while I wait for that... and it didn't really work I guess, seeing as I've already devoured the story far too soon.
You're a really good writer.

i was wondering if Bella existed in this one

esme is designing something for diana isn't she :D

she isn’t really her singer right? that's crazy

dude. I do not like that Carlile just told Diana about what happened to Rose like that. that wasn't his to share. And I don’t think she would want her to know.
not cool.

your writing is still amazing, but I did not expect that

Jennifer Jorgensen? xD JJ

Diana is cute. it's funny to see how hard she tries to prove herself when all it would take for her to be accepted is ask, at least as far as Esme, Emmet and Alice are concerned. and maybe Eddie.

Ahhh so her power basically exists solely to get her out of the way for important canon events.

Which is really stupid btw. If your gonna make it AU by introducing a new mate - a shifter one at that - for Alice then take from there, was really silly to 'conveniently' have her out of the picture only at moments where canon stuff could happen.

Would have been so much better to have her there - she wouldn't have let the 3 of them go once she knew that they were killing people around Forks, which meant it would have been 7 vs 3 right there and then (with Edward grabbing Bella and running) and Laurant, James, and Victoria would have stood a fucking chance. Which means no Twilight climax and no Eclipse climax.

Damn I was really hoping Diana would butterfly away Twilight. Really really too convenient she didn't get a premonition about it, makes it seem very forced I mean she gets them for broken headlights but not this? A lot of bad shit comes of it.

I had a feeling upon her reaction to Esme that she'd be related to her someway through her mother, I got a feeling with the family tree things I'm gonna be right.

The comment at the start that she was half-white, and then her reaction to Esme, it got me thinking that Esme had a sibling who is Diana's direct ancestor so Esme is like her Great or Great Great or Great Great Aunt.

Just wanted to inform you that Chapter 27 has been posted twice.

I have reread this story a couple of times and it only gets better. Absolutely amazing work!

I love this. Thank you.

This was amazing. I wish you had done part 2 xx

How the hell did you finish this story ten years ago and it still reads as well as your most recent works? You really have a gift for writing. I’ve been binging your stories and I didn’t expect to even like this one- I shouldn’t be surprised honestly. You’ve yet to write a story that hasn’t made me love it. It took me about 4 hours to read this, 61 chapters and I was so ensnared in the story I didn’t realize it was ending till I clicked on the final chapter. If you ever get into writing novels PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update your profile with your authors name, I’d hate to not be able to appreciate more of your work. You’re just about the only author on this site that writes lesbian romance in a believable and not fetishized way- though that’s not to say you skip the sexy bits of the romance, you just pace them well so it adds to the story instead of detracting from it. Thank you, Princess Alexandria, and have a great life 3