such a mary sue!
i hope it gets better.

Aww thats the ending!:(:( I really liked how you ended it. I cant wait to read the sequel!:)

I LOVED IT! *faints*

YESSSSS *faints*

IM CRYING! *faints*

B-DAY *faints*

YAY! *faints*

YESSSSSSSSSSSS CHAPTERS EVERYWHERE SOOOOO MANY CHAPPIES *faints*

Intriguing idea you’ve got here, I have to admit.

Writing style could be a bit better in some areas, of course- you sometimes make it a bit hard to really FEEL how the people involved in the plot feel about some of the events taking place- (And the concept of ‘Scarecrow’ being in Crane’s record before the Ra’s crisis is SERIOUSLY stretching credulity; who’d put a man with a record like THAT in charge of an asylum?), but the central concept is rather interesting.

In many ways, the only REAL problem with this story is simple; you need to elaborate on some areas more than others (Particularly in Alex’s role in the train fight; you should have planned out more about what you wanted her to actually DO there because as it was her presence seemed fundamentally superfluous).

Still, you got in some interesting scenes with her and the Joker in the inter-movie period, and while you could have elaborated on her relationship with Harvey Dent- I really don’t think he was QUITE as much of a jerk as you sometimes made him out to be here- what there was worked out fairly well.

Loved the story! Keep up the good work!

Absolute fantastic story one of the best i've read on this site :D

Do a sequel ;)

i know this is my first time reviewing ur story, cause i dont like to review stories. but since u are writting a sequel, which makes me happy, i'll review.

i thought u explained situtions very well, i knew what u were talking about, i didn't have to make up something as i read it. the dialouge and the plot line was very clear. Alex was a fresh new character to add to the story and it gave Batman Begins and the Dark Knight something fresh as well.

when i read the last chapter and realized that u completed the story, it made me mad. but now that i know u are making a sequel, i have something to look forward to.

and can i make a seggestion about the sequel, i dont care what u call it, but can u get alex and bruce together because thats what ur story needs.

Oh no! I missed reviewing before the "last" chapter was put up! I think it was a very fitting ending, nice job with it. Looking forward to the sequal (if you ever find a title that is, lol)

:)

thats preposterous! the clicky button iz ALWAYS needed! anyway, im glad i always make u laugh. i dont always TRY but, im glad i can! as for titles...im drawing a blank...BUT I'LL GET BACK TO YOU!

*Johanna Black*

aw, its over :( his was such a good story! i think you already told me, but sequel?