I thought this was very tasteful and well written the love scene was very erotic and good resemblance of what would have really happen if Sarah was of age and jareth and her actually made love good job on your fan fiction it was short but a beautiful scene

I loved it. Thank you.

Really good, steamy and hot

Frank is better than any goblin king

God bless you !thank you so much for this, it was fucking hot kisses and love

So hawt. I wished they did this in movie version

Dayyyyyyum! Blushing like mad! Holy shiz nits!

Hot!

I have to be honest, the song part really threw me off but besides that it was a really good story. :)

The story was good but I don't think that the song idea was not that good

it was a lovely story.

I love everything about it: from his still coming to her when she asked, to their mini battle of wills, to how well I feel you captured the Jareth character. I think you handled Sarah well, too, since she is older now and was bound to have changed a little, but that part at prom still seems to fit original Sarah. Nice work! A million thumbs up

I love how you relate both the song and this couple. Love the detail in how they both sort of torture tease each other.

Hi Katie!

I've never watched this movie but I did enjoy your fic very much.

I like how Jareth behaves... He is very hot... I wouldn't mind if he wanted to rule me... Haha

I'll make sure to rub it properly... Hauhau

I'll try to rent the DVD next time I'm in blockbuster! :D

too bad that I know that they don't have a happy ever after in the movie, judging by your fic... Hihi

but... Don't tell me! Hihi

seeya

Intresting and unique portrayal of the Goblin King. I liked it, even if it was PWP. ;)