Reviews for An Unfortunate Coincidence
iceprincess272 chapter 6 . 3/27/2010
I for real loved this story!

i just read all of it at once.

For real you guys should so like countine you this!

PLEZ UPDATE SOON!
hexenkind chapter 6 . 4/27/2009
This was a really awesome chapter!

This story is totally and completely the funniest and seriousest (is that even a word xD) at the same time!

Can't wait for the next one, when's it coming out?
PaulMeMaybe chapter 6 . 3/22/2009
wow.. shanial (Awesome name btw) is growing up! Travis is a little demon! He reminds me of my cousin! She went under the table and yelled that I hit her but I won the argument because I was on the other side of the room with her sister! Anyway.. I like this story. Update soon!

-Bianca
00null00 chapter 6 . 3/14/2009
BAHA I love this! hehe update soon please XD

xoxo

~KT~
Curly96 chapter 6 . 3/9/2009
Shanial needs to learn some it would be like so funny if Mitchie and travis gave Shaniel manner lessons you know? like have him play with Travis and have him say like please and thank you as if he were a little !Well I lov the

LUV,

Curly96/Maria/whatever you wanna call me.
Diamondsshine4ever chapter 6 . 3/1/2009
Update son please!
nolongerinterested chapter 6 . 2/17/2009
update soon!

Love the story!
beetsbearsbattlestargalactica chapter 6 . 2/17/2009
lol keep going!
hey chapter 6 . 2/16/2009
omg

oh yeahh Mitchiiee is the bestt
Eloise Lawrence chapter 6 . 2/16/2009
That was amazingly funny!

For some reason it really made me laugh when you said hips side to side in slow motion!

God knows why lol xx
jbanddemiobsessed95x chapter 6 . 2/16/2009
omg, shanial, what has he done this time, i mean, okay so travis gets away with things and you get mad, but shanial has gone a bit too far, hmm, hmm, anyways haha, i loved it hehe, and i can't wait for the next part
sCaRaHx3 chapter 6 . 2/16/2009
Dramatic... "Back to the matter at hand Shanial... Oh my God! I just called myself Shanial!" haha! PLEASE UPDATE! This story rocks!
ThatsNoneofYourBusiness chapter 6 . 2/16/2009
Whoa! Shane without a big head? Amazing! This is so cute, I can't wait to read more!

P.S. Love the vocabulary level part!
Camp Rockians chapter 6 . 2/16/2009
Aw... I liked the other side of Shanial.
mcecile chapter 6 . 2/15/2009
woah. he's sorry.

well, he should be. he almost raped her.

lmao. great story! update soon! :]

mattie
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