It's been a while since you wrote and posted this, so Iam not sure you're still waiting on reviews at all but I am giving you one anyway. I don't understand how you don't have about a million reviews for this. It's simply beautiful and I think you capture Fiyero very well.

Well done!

Holly

love it. Lots of very cute scenes. Keep writing!

This was so well done ) I love how you managed to portray Fiyero so perfectly, as well his changing opinions and thoughts of Elphaba.

Great job!

Very nice; I like how you've done all the insight into Fiyero's character, and particularly that you've managed to use such incredibly short scenes so effectively. Lovely. Thank you!