Lol at humanity not being able to create a camera big enough for Tracks ego. Tis true, but Cybertronians couldn't either. Let alone Sunstreaker's. X'D

Ending is indeed sappy. :3

Lol

Just shoulda confessed. XD

Really enjoying this.

Great oneshot!

I hope you can update this at some point, it's really brilliant story and I've enjoyed reading it.

The part where Sunstreaker threatened Spike's life freaked me out, in that Spike didn't *not* believe it, and that is just not on, in terms of abuse of power, and that he got away with it. And Sideswipe is such a racist bully. Feh.

Yay life lessons.

Hah! The Fear of Ratchet. Spike's persistent fear of being useless or annoying is being handled pretty interestingly.

This time it's Brawn "loosing patients," which is to say 'setting free subjects of medical care' rather than "losing patience," which is 'running out of tolerance for waiting.' Topical, his being aggravatingly trapped in a med-care setting, but not the meaning intended in the sentence. Also, you've got an 'effected' where you meant 'affected.'

Hee! Color is actually really big in Autobot culture, isn't it? And I really want to know how Cliffjumper managed to get that ticket without the cops freaking out about the empty car-I mean, even if he has a holographic driver, can a holograph accept pieces of paper and come off as human enough not to be pulled in for drug testing and all? It's a good thing he knew to pull over and not make a scene about the ticket and all that, though. XD Very funny character work.

For future reference, though, Spike almost certainly felt 'nauseous,' the adjective, not 'nauseas,' the rarely-seen plural noun, and he probably sat on the edge of one of the 'consoles,' not the 'consuls,' as a consul is a person who has been appointed to a specific type of diplomatic position. There could in theory be one of these persons on the bridge, but I doubt Spike would be sitting on one so nonchalantly. Spellcheck and the English homophonic profusion strike again.

this is awsome! )

Oh man Spike is slightly accident prone isn't he? This is a cute idea by the way.

Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon.

William Tells Overture seems to fit the chase scene rather well XD I could just imagine Spike running...not that I wouldn't be either. Ratchet can get scary o_o

seriously thought Ratchet, ya could be a little more grateful to Spike, he helped save Bumblebee...though I suppose the Hatchet really was worried. Spike could have really hurt himself. Be more careful Spike!

Great story, I can't wait to read more. It was funny about the Autobots confused on the meaning of colors, makes me wonder how the autobots would react when October rolls around with Halloween and then December with Christmas.