Awesome story it was great! I love these guys BTW kai and tala are my favs ! You are a great writer seriously! You have great writing skills...keep it up!

Funny,Heartwarming fic,great job

Aha haha hilarious story. I really like how you mixed moments of seriousness in with the humor. I thought the ending was great too btw. Lol kai got his (pointless) revenge

So, it's been a while since I read your story... I can honstly say that this is the BEST story eveeer! I mean, you inspired me to write my own! And I'm not kidding lol.

I'm sorry if I didn't reviewed before, but I just didn't know what to say.

Thank you for making such an awesome, lovely story.

You are the best! :)

Hi! ) I'm Tsuki500(me and my sister share this account) I know it's been a long time since you finished this story but I read it some time ago and I didn't have an account so that's why I'm leaving the review now ) I just wanted to let you know how much I like this fic, even though the characters are ooc I didn't mind it at all ) my big sis also read this and she really liked it.

By the way if my writing is weird it's cause I'm from Argentina.

Lol, I love this story! I can't believe it's over!

ROFL tala got what he deserved. SEQUEL, PLEASE!

. . . . it's over . . . ?

(cries) No! Please say it's not so! ToT

I loved this story! It's one of my favorite fanfics, and last night, we went camping, and all I could think about was this fic...luckily, none of my friends are as dumb as Ian in wandering about in the woods at night... XD

I shall wait and look for more from you because I just enjoy all of your fics.

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NOOOOO! It can't be done! :( You HAVE to make a sequel! Camping was part 1...part 2 can be a vacay to Vegas! ;) PLEASE! This was one of the best stories hahahaha

HAHAHA! Kai got his revenge at last and Tala got what he deserved, both at the hospital and with Kai. I'm thrilled that you finally finished the fic and I like how it turned out, though the end was slightly rushed. Good luck on your new stories!

YES! Finished, finally. Officialy love this story 3 hehe Tala got his comeuppance in the end.

Ya! It's finaly complete! I thought you were never going to finish! Nice job on this, it was great whiell it lasted!

I'm sad this story is already done (, ah well. Really good job and... well Tala shouldn't complain about what Kai did since he WAS annoying him...

update. right. now. :P

lol this is far too interesting and heart warming to not finish! :P

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I finally finished reading all 13 chapters! Yay! I really enjoyed this a lot! I can't wait until more crazy things happens! This is a random idea but it'll be funny to have a chapter on the bit-beasts and a conspiracy against their masters for a day, lol, I'd laugh, really, really hard!

Good job!

wow...this..this is kind of amazing...only the 1st chapter and I am already crying from laughing too hard... of course...it is also 5:00 in the morning here...but oh well! Love it and I will continue reading this epic bit of hilarity!