Oh I hope your update is soon because before the fall made me cry like a baby.

I love this story! Can't wait for more! :)

Please write more! I'm such a big Vexen fan and I loved the story you wrote about Even before this one. I would love to know how they hook back up and how it all eventually ends. I would really appreciate it if you write more, thanks! :3

Can't wait for the next up date. I've enjoyed 'Before the Fall' immensely for Vexen reasons.

See ya.

O.O

AW! Poor Ienzo! :( His fate was so cruel! (granted, all of their fates were cruel)

Even after all he has done, I feel so bad for Xehanort. He's practically killing himself! :( (I want to hug him)

Please write more! :3 I've just finished this but already I'm deperaste for more! :D

Hey, sorry I haven't reviewed yet! I was just unsure what to say...

I'm really happy that you got the sequel up! I've been wanting to know what was going to happen... if Vexen would ever see Raine again, how Xemnas and Vexen would get along, and so on.

Thank you so much for posting the sequel! Hope to see this story updated soon! No pressure though.

All of your work that I've read has always been interesting, entertaining, and well-written, and after reading this first chapter, I can tell that "The Journey Down" will match- if not succeed- the good qualities of "Before the Fall" (although that story will always be one of my favorites!). You did an awesome job with writing about how the characters reacted to the strange situation they were in and the changes they experienced (I particularly liked Braig's reaction to his hair and Dilan's comment afterward XD). It's also interesting to read about the new side of Xehanort. Anyway, I look forward to reading more of this story and seeing what happens next!

P.S.- Will Raine be appearing as a character/minor character in this story, or will she stay as just being mentioned?

Yes! You could not imagine the look on my face when I finally realized you updated! Poor Even/Vexen, I hope he sees Raine again T_T

The first chapter of your sequel definitely does not disappoint. I haven't been online for a couple days, and now I'm very glad I bothered to log on even though it's Christmas morning. I love your stories, and this is one tale I've been longing to hear ever since "Before the Fall" ended. I'll be watching :)

This story is so good!

I loved it!

But I feel so entirely bad for Ienzo. D: D:

Even was pretty intense in this chapter.

If I was him, I would totally beat the crud out of Xehanort...

But also another part of me feels bad for poor Xehanort.

"Dilan smirked, “Nah, you've always been jealous of my good looks.” He winked one of his violet eyes~""

LOL.

I love you and you Dilan-y ways. (:

This was a beautiful read:) I'm wondering how the Organization is going to form though if they all want to beat Xehanort to a pulp. Can't wait for the next chapter!