Whats gonna happen next?

Beautiful. :D

Lovely.

My favourite loveless one-shot Great job.

so sweet & right-write more!

okay that was just BEAUTIFUL! I love your ideas and theories, and especially the part about their threads intertwining... Really quite lovely. I loved the evolution of Soubi's paintings, too, and how Ritsuka matured. Very nice! _

you didn't write the scene! come on! this was under M which means you put in the sex scene! I want that scene!

please!

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aw i so loved this! it wasn't lquite M, but very good nonetheless

That was really beautiful!

Omg, I loved this! Very nice characterization, also good show of depth and growth on Ritsuka's part. Very nicely done. Would have liked a little more dialogue to be honest, but the lack of it isn't a negative point. I just like dialogue. But seriously though, nice job.

awesome!

such pretty use of words!

interesting and detailed, i love it!

Wow, that was so awesome, I really like the way you took the story of Loveless and put it in to your own words and your own world.

Wow! This was so beautiful!

Thank you.

Oh my God, that was so very stunning to read. The descriptive text was engrossing and written so delicately. I could visualize everything so easily. This story was a real gem; insightful, in character and emotive. Without being sentimental. A fantastic feat in itself. I loved it!

My peek into the Loveless fandom proved fruitful. :p The whole time I was reading I kept coming across lovely things that made me love the story more. Allow me to elaborate! I was really impressed by Ritsuka's characterization. In the series, Ritsuka is younger and I think we fic authors sometimes forget to change him accordingly when we skip ahead a few years, but you really gave Ritsuka the depth that was there, but just developing when he was younger. I think this Ritsuka is just what I would expect years later. He's still the quiet oberver, but a little more confident and self accepting.