Reviews for Wolfram of Shin Makoku
Emi kei Usagi chapter 10 . 3/23/2016
Omg to think it ended so soon, but still this story is so underrated, ughh and it saddens me it is over, but happy for Wolfram and Yuuri... The only thing that confused me is that after 10 years no one mentioned how Greta, Sara and Nicolas changed (so i kinda imagined the 10 years is 2 years) but the sex scenes were yummy erotic and neat. Oh and I love the flow of words, i found some minor grammar mistakes that can be overlooked. But really your fiction was amazing, my heart was racing with excitment that i hadn't felt for a while... Thank you veru much!
And your fic made me nervous and worried about the FIRST time i am going to be ONE with My lover, oh gosh!
XxXAdishoXxX chapter 10 . 7/17/2014
A really fantastic story :)!
moopad chapter 10 . 9/14/2012
I'm just starting into this KKM fanfic and love this fic sooo much. When it can be so dramatic and it can be so hilarious. I was into Wolf unrequited love and the romance in later chapter. Also, the first time thing between the innocent two is just so funny. Like when Finn(Glee) believes that he knocks up Quinn during a hot tub together.
Anyhow, Big Thanx for sharing your awesome work.
Sighcoe chapter 10 . 7/30/2012
I enjoyed reading the story BUT, I'm just wondering if the first five chapter is written by different author and the last five chapter, another one? It's just that the writing style is very different, the pacing, the description and the mending of the plot was gawkingly incomparable. The first five chapter was actually very decent, no clicheness, characters are so in characters, the plot moves properly and so on and so forth, but when it jumps of to chapter 6, everything is a whirlwind. It's just pretty weird if you ask me, while I was reading the first five chapter, I kept on wondering as to why the review is very little, but when I reached chapter 6, I nodded in understanding. That's why I'm asking if the story is written by two person because really, the difference of creative writing is glaringly obvious.
WinterValentine chapter 10 . 7/18/2011
It was amazing I would hope to see at least a two shot one about the honey moon and the other possible future like kids and such
AshleyTangerine chapter 10 . 6/7/2010
I think it's a fantastic story-and I loved the ending!
anon azure chapter 10 . 6/3/2010
THIS WAS SO AWESOME!

TO THE FAVORITES!
thunderqueenlyn chapter 10 . 5/1/2010
i like it.. no.. i love it! i really love the part where Yuuri buried his face in wolfram's lap and confessed. . and Paris is the perfect place..
alguien22792 chapter 10 . 3/18/2010
Omg your story was freaking awesome!

Such a great idea to inspired your story in Helen of Troy!

It's so hard to find a good story that also have

good smut~~

But you did it! XD

Oh yeah, and you make me so happy with this phrase:

"He very much loves being a man who happens to be in love with another man"

SO CUTE~ (sorry, i'm a hardcore yaoi fan )
sinandtragedy chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
aw~

this is pretty :)

i like it:D

*goes off to read next chapter*
TheEndofTag chapter 10 . 9/5/2009
aw..i just love it!...everything was just perfect!...thank you for sharing!
kikuyame chapter 10 . 6/16/2009
haha ! i really really really really lyk ur story ! wow ! its good ! its not good but the best ! keep on writing ! gudLuck en more ideas 2 cum ! ur the best !
helga1967 chapter 10 . 5/2/2009
Excelent, romantic and complete with good sex
awfullybad chapter 2 . 4/4/2009
When Ken talked about his love for Shinou, it was so beautiful. I love that pairing so much.
sakuravalkyrie chapter 8 . 3/27/2009
wow. What a guy. I thought Nicholas was a gentleman, turns out he was just lusting after Wolfram. Maybe something happened in the last 10 years Yuuri was gone?
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