wooo que genial esta cuando subis mas

Please update more!

Revenge of the Sith moment between naruto and mizuki. But mizuki didn’t burn.

That was excellent chapter. In the story you have portrayed the jedi and dark jedi perfectly. Brilliant combination with sasuke and naruto as well.

P.s. i really look forward to your next chapter.

i like this its a great idea, personally i think giving him a light saber immediately overpowers him to ridiculous standards but it still works

the best story so far my update soon

Into the shitfic pile this goes.

Woah this is some pretty awesome stuff, it's a shame you haven't updated in awhile, please do so.

I like the story so far, but spelling and punctuation leaves a bit to be desired.

I saw that you never place a period, question mark, or exclamation point at the end of dialogue.

You also use 'there' which refers to location, as opposed to 'their' which means it belongs to someone. Example: Their weapons are impressive.

Sincerely, Pagemaster

regarding the 'straight katana' no such weapon exists. A katana is curved. If it isn't, it's not a katana. A better name for his weapon would be a ninjato, a chokuto, or perhaps just a single-edged straight sword.

That aside, I love the story and hope it doesn't end soon.

Sincerely, Pagemaster

this is amazing you should make more

NOOOOOOOOOOO! KENJI!

Like it? I'm in love with it! Keep it up!

Seriously, I wish you would continue this

Just read your an at the end, and I apologize since I forgot about the splitting up part.