| Reviews for Our Secret pt1: Love |
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llazo4108822 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013 I love this fanfic. |
llazo4108824 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013 I love this fanfic. |
Amer Leon chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 this was truly a great chap...i like the way you put events in sequence and covered them with some great twists that make your story so cool! i also like the way that naruto and hinata would make sure that they stay together...i had never seen that idea before. putting all of this in one chap worked well for your story...and i will move on the continuation. I will probably read all of your stories if they are of the same quality as this one! |
James B chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 I really like you'r story's but I think you should make a more in depth version of this story instead of just 3 one-shot story's. I also think that it'll boost the amount of readers you have and I believe that this story has potential to go further. |
JSP chapter 1 . 4/12/2011 Very nice fluff story. Doesn't completely focus on sticking them into a situation where they immediately know everything about each other. There is some character development and thank you for not going into the pedophilia. |
Jessie Brown chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 I love this so much. |
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010 this was a great story, cant believe i never reviewed it... |
Kylar's-Apprentice chapter 1 . 8/1/2010 it so seems like this could be possible for some of the moments in the show! (although sadly it doesn't v.v)... is it just me, or does hinata seem a little to determined to use that law? |
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 8/22/2009 i love it |
naruhina-fanboy-devlin chapter 1 . 6/15/2009 very ood take on their relationship i applaud u for your genious |
Zamoria chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 awesome story! i love the idea of them being secretly together. and the loophole hinata found...*grins* but yeah, two 13-year-olds...no. too young. loved how considerate naruto was about the whole thing. any random boy would have jumped at the offer, damn the consequences. i'm also really interested in jiraiya and hikari's story. i'll read the sequel tomorrow since it's late already. but thanks for a brilliant read! |
cynicalConquestar chapter 1 . 4/29/2009 Okay, I loved the Naruhina in this fic, but you need to work on separating words and using the right words. |
syk0weasel chapter 1 . 2/8/2009 Great chapter, hope you continue it and do other parts. |
Tenshi Namikaze chapter 1 . 1/21/2009 that was so sweet, i can't wait for pt 2 & 3 |
Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 1/10/2009 That was sweet. Please keep going. |