so in the end nagato and itachi didn't end together but this story was very what happen with neji and hinata after they gone?pain with his wife and sons?and itachi in uchiha clan?mmmm

but afterall i love this story

Thank you for finishing this story. I quite liked it.
It's too bad you won't be writing on them anymore, but it is generally anti-motivational when characters one's interested in aren't around anymore.

Awesome tory, that I am glad you finished. And what an end! People died and moved on with their lives. This story had nice momentum.

It's a bit eerie how I stumbled upon this story just a few days before you post the final chapter, and how I've finished reading on that same day. Lucky me, as Pein may say.

All in all, the plot lines have bundled neatly together. Though I wonder what was Orochimaru's objective in all this, he has let go of his perfect guinea pig without a fight. I even regretted it for a second, it would be such an interesting start of a new arc... Okay, wistful thinking.

Oh yes, and you've killed Kakashi. This is the second story I've read where this sacrilegious act is happening, and it still doesn't feel any better. But not as bad as after that one story where the guy was a villain. Brr. I have always wondered why I don't like it when some shit is happening to him, he is not even my favorite character. Hn. At least you didn't suffer, Kakashi.

But regardless it was a cool story, I really had a good time reading it.

I would add the story to my favorite, but I've forgotten my damn password, so as soon as my amnesia passes I will do just that. Take care.

I loved this story so much!

paskudajoying this story too much for my own good. I appreciate that you haven't lost interest in this fic after almost eight years, I respect and love dearly the authors who complete what they started.

By the way, I find it a little strange that you seem to think the chapter will be boring if there is no lemon there. Maybe it's just my preference, but I find the lemons boring instead. It's always interesting to be absorbed into an old good fighting scene or those dirty political machinations, it's intriguing and unpredictable, or it has to be. And with sex you kinda always know how it will end lol.

Please continue?:)

Aww, that was kind of an endearing scene.

I’m glad Pein wants to go out with Itachi. I love the pairing Pein/Itachi! I love bottom Itachi! I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!

That was the most amazing and captivating peiita story I have ever read. Thank you for writting this piece of work, hope to see an update soon it

-speechless- This was really an amazing chapter. I loved it all ,including fight scene! You really are a talented person.
The end of this story has left me dejected like really xD, After all I have been following this story for 4 years, but I'm super excited at the same time *-* All good things must come to an end after all.
Please update soon!

It’s sad that Kakashi and Kurenai died. I’m glad Pein, Itachi, and the others are ok. I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!

This is one of my favorite fic for now. You write really well! Now I'm curious what happened to Hidan and Deidara..

Keep it up!

THIS FIC ACTUALLY GOT UPDATED! This truly has made my day as I honestly did not except more to this story. Fanfiction galore, all my favourite fics,especially this one, is getting updated again!

And now, Hidan is dying :'( I also feel like Pein and Itachi have seen too less of each other, but I do like Madara very much :D.

I hope Pein, Itachi and Madara will be ok. I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!