i found a good read yeay. its old fic but YES its good. and kudos for that ending xD haha

Damn, it's awesome! First I fell awkward about the whole thing with raping and Kanji's involvement, but, damn, you've finished the story in just wonderful way! Thank you very much, thank you for the great plot, for the characters, for their love - god, I love them both! Thank you!

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That was just... Just... Woah, man. That was a trip. An emotional roller coaster. I loved it. I was kind of skeptical at first, I don't really like drama, (I'm more of a light-hearted romantic comedy kind of girl) but, wow. I loved the ending. It was absolutely adorable, completely made up for the, uh... Icky parts in the beginning. It got kind of hard to follow for a while near the middle, but it was overall very well written, with quality that's very hard to find on this site.

You, my friend, just earned yourself a favorite.

This story is excellent. You did a great job incorporating your own twist into the Persona 4 story while maintaining the characters' personality within these new shocking scenario. These scenarios are also well thought of. I admit that this is the one of the few story that manage to create me a myriad of emotions ranging from sadness to pure joy within a span of a few chapter.

Despite a disturbing content in the beginning, the story turned out to be much milder than I had feared, which is a good thing for me. The happy ending after the event in the actual game also give a sense of completion to it all. Overall, let me say it again that this story is simply EXCELLENT!

Poor naive teddy. Well special hug is one way of putting it at least. I felt bad when you said that and then stated that someone took it away from Naoto.

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Damn, what keeps happening. I think it's going to stay in one tone but that quickly changes. This is good writing. I feel bad for Kanji-kun though.

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Naoto! No! Man, that was a big blow. I wonder what happens next.

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Naoto! Where did she go? Haha, success, there is another chapter.

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What kind of creep would cut up a stuff toy? Sure it was a warning, it was symbolic and a little metaphoric, but just stupid. If I wanted to warn someone, I would find a more terrifying way to do it. Other than that, good chapter.

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The revenge of Mystery food X? Didn't see that one coming till the let's make a cake part. They way you described her going into her room, I was half expecting her to be attacked. Glad she wasn't. I secretly could care less what happens to her gramps though.

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Wow, I think I can start to put together some stuff of who might be behind all of this. Although, since it the persona series, it might be someone no one was expecting. Keep up the good work.

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Wow, wasn't expecting her to get attacked in the hospital. The killer is a real creep, and a loser for doing that. This is getting intense and interesting. Good job.

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Wow, Souji know what and where to get staff. He is way smarter than he leads on. Well this is really good writing and I am enjoying your story. Keep up the good work.

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Wait, didn't they find out that she was a girl? Oh well, doesn't matter. After all, it helps to the story. I guess the crush Kanji had on him is going away.

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