yeah...update! Like, now. Seriously, dude. What the crap? Just give them some spy challenge or something where they have laser guns and have to hide and stuffz.

I'm dying with antipation!

yes, chris is right, WAy to much to keep track of. Derek is the one who owns LK, right? I thought so. :)

That was an awesome chapter! I loved it!

Could you give Haley a few more lines? Lillie and Emma do all the talking!

my oc's name is Kassie not Kassey, you got closer but still not right! Btw, in every chapter Kassie only got one line, and I really would like to see more of her! thx xD and update soon!

Lauren spoke like 3 times! Dang you! You better post the next chapter soon!

Yeah! Nikki and Noah! Okay I don't think I added this but Nikki would gladly beat someone up(yeah, shes a jerk). Also if she's ever reading, the book is probably by Poe. I really like the story so far. Nice job. Good luck w/ your writing.

-Lilyy

its good and all but.

you didnt mention alot of the other characters.

haha! hilarious, it was good.

Okay, I'll bite. Why the hell is Fred Fredburger in here?

I LOVE THIS STORY! And I love Derek, AND LK!

Just to clear something up, Cassie is the gothic animal-lover, and Casie is Lauren's dog.

Ok... Yeah.

Awesome! GO Lauren! Casey sounds so cute!

. Yay! Kim made it! Tehehe...by the way, I forgot to add this, but her friends call her Kimi.

...I can totally see her stealing Zeke's toque while he's sleeping...and then staring at him creepily! Tehehe!

Update SooN!

Name: Marques Tyler

Age: 16

Race: African American with a little Hispanic

Stereotype: The R&B Soulja

Appearance: Reddish Brown Skin, Athletic Body Type, Black Hair in a Buzz Cut

Personality: Smart, Funny, Thoughtful, Sarcastic, Brave & Outgoing

Clothes: Black and Red Muscle Shirt, Dark Grey Jeans, Black and Red Sneakers

Fears/Phobias: Staying Under Water for longer than necessary

Talents: Playing the guitar; Hip Hop dancing; and Singing.

Why TRS?: Marques dreams of being a famous actor one day and hopes that TRS Will give him that chance.

Do you want to be paired with anyone? If so, what kind of person? (Only put canon characters if they are single!): Yes; The Goth, Or The TomBoy Girl Type

Audition Tape (Optional):

* The Camera Shows a night club where everyone is gathered around in a circle. EveryOne Claps as Marques comes out from the middle of the circle and sits down.*

Hey Wassup, This Is Marques. *Takes a sip of the soda* I Choose TRS because I think it will help open Acting Careers for me, and maybe some Singing Careers too. *he waves at a few girls who walk pass* So if you want a Smart, Hip-Hop Crazed, Teen on your show, I'm your guy...* gets back up and walks back into the dance floor.*