It's been 11 years since you wrote this story and i absolutely adore it. Brought back my own memories of the original FF7, advent children, and now ff7 remake. Thank you for such a beautifully written story.

-donellys13

leaving hearts for this fic!
i loved cloud and tifa here a lot. how you explored that “what if tifa’s mind was afflicted and it was cloud’s turn to take care of her” scenario was incredible. It was neat, how you tied everything together! amnesia/jenova cells/ pregnancythe plot is very well thought out! this can be a legit extension or sequel to ACC/DoC.
the amnesia was heartbreaking, but not frustrating to read about. i was constantly happy and cheering for tifa as she regained her memories bit by bit. cloud is so patient and loving, but he is also human and i really loved how tifa chose to resolve that part where all the troubles are getting to cloud and he was almost losing it.
i loved how you wrote the family dynamics, marlene and denzel, and how the other characters are important to cloud and tifa’s lives. the descriptions of domestic life, especially at the end, was so calming. and finally i just appreciated how they constantly said the important words to each other.
this was very heartwarming. i’m grateful it exists _

Oh my goodness, if I knew gems like this story existed, I would've joined the FFVII fandom long ago! This is a phenomenal tale from start to finish. I absolutely love how you seamlessly blend together the flashbacks with the main story. The way you incorporate the development of every character while staying true to the source material is second to none. I know it's been over a decade since you wrote this, but stories like this are simply timeless.

This is one of the most well-thought out fics I have read so far and makes me guilty if I wouldn't leave at least one review after finishing it.

I know it's been over a decade since you published this, but I just recently got into the CloTi fandom and when this was recommended in the CloTi server I decided to check it out. And I'm so glad I did - I was so amazed by this story I read almost the whole thing in one sitting (stopping only because it was late and I was falling asleep!) and loved every minute of it. How you wrote Tifa and Cloud's relationship, Cloud being the supportive but also overwhelmed father and husband, and also all the other characters with their little quirks. I loved the ending - Cloti babies are always so cute and the image of little Zack in a car seat on the back of Fenrir made me squee out loud. I also appreciate how Tifa is still remembering things even years after her accident, it definitely gave the story so much realism. Thank you for writing this!

I'm sure your still surprised at getting this reviews after it's been so long since you've published it but it speaks volumes about the story. I read this once a while ago and loved it and I feel the same way rereading it now! The story and concept were amazing and this is a classic ff7 fic. The feels are just flowin through me right now I can't even articulate what I wanna say anymore but loved this story and hope your safe and happy

Finally I have finished this amazing fic. I know you have written this a decade ago but still this story still touches many who are discovering it now just like me. wow what a ride. i’m so into reading Cloti fics in post-AC period lately. I just love reading about their journey as a family together. Thank youu so much for writing this wonderful fic

This is the best FFVII story I've ever read. I know you wrote it over a decade ago, and I cannot believe I just discovered it, but my god! What a ride it was! Thank you for giving us this gem!

Hands down my favorite chapter. I seriously re-read it at least 3 times haha. Thanks for the awesome writing!

This was very satisfying. :)

That was a ride. It was truly interesting, seeing an amnesiac Tifa and Cloud doing his best to keep her close but without intrusion. The friends too were incredibly supportive. The poor kids meanwhile have lost their mom in a way, yet they still rallied.

The mystery of the attack was also intriguing and makes for a good external plot to tie it all together. The tragedy with the kidnappings and the school really banded everyone.

Anyway, my words probably didn't convince you, but it was a great read. Thanks for writing.

This was such an emotional ride but a really sweet one. I loved how you characterized Cloud and his relationship with Tifa

Loved this! I was a little sceptical thinking it would be predictable but it wasn’t. It was so nice to see Cloud have to be the strong one and hold it together for his family instead of his family keeping him together!

This will be my 1st review after reading your amazing fic, i was searching for a good Cloti fic and all i had was dissapointed with how most author describing either or both of Cloud and Tifa very OOC not to mention some of them make Tifa as a slut or weak girl who could easily sway by other.

so cute