After reading through the whole 10 chapters, I can say that this story is... nice. Kid, Black Star,Liz and Maka are on-point personality-wise. When Spirit was involved I could'nt help but laugh a lot, those scenes were executed perfectly.
The scene when Kid was at that clothing store was genious, hillarious, and super in-character.

But it has room for improvement. Lots of it.

*First and foremost, there are spelling mistakes and grammatical errors pretty much everywhere; I didn't really enjoy this depiction of Soul, He is way more apathetic than in canon, and his bloodthirst is way over the top, to the point it becomes obnoxious to read, plus his added protectiveness, makes Soul look predictable and flanderized. Most of the time his actions were somewhat justified, like the Brawl he had with the 17 guys. But that justification goes straighr out of the window at the moment he 'threatened' the guy who asked for a Pen, that was more Possesive than anything.
And I also noticed that Soul is WAY more aggressive towards everyone.

But he has some redeeming qualities, he is as witty as I remember, and the earrings detail made me crack a big smile.

*Patty acts way dirtier than I remember, specially in the later chapters.

*Maka's carelessness feels a tad forced.

*Stein is very hit or miss; On some chapters he is potrayed flawlessly, while on others, it seems... odd, like for example:
¿Why would Stain, a borderline sociopath, suddenly grow a libido out of nowhere and start making out with Marie? And then on the Dance, pretty much ignore her. dunno.

*The biggest "Hold the fucking door" moment was when Shinigami ENABLED one of his weapons to drug his own Son (aka tricking him into drinking a spiked glass of water with an unknown narcotic or compound, that pretty much knocks him up, making him defenseless aganist whatever Patty may throw at him) as a 'birthday gift', leading to Patty sleeping with Kid without his consent, that is rapey, utterly inexcusable, and fucked up in lots of different ways.

Other than the issues listed above, the Story itself may hook You, the scenarios are very well made, and it's really smooth to read, I can guarantee that you won't get lost or confused while reading this.

6/10. Call me dramatic, but these issues are too big for me to ignore.

Very good! Fanfic! Good gosh, it's remind watching Hellsing Ultimate OVA especially the last chapter (X) is basically 1-hour EPISODE! WOW!?

The story is fascinating you know the best part chapter would be in 8, 910 partically really intense and also I never had any emotion particular the worst way to happen.

I can't imagine being fanfiction into anime OVA very implausible to happens.

okay but how. hoooooooowwww do you write these characters SO. IN. CHARACTER. It BLEW MY MIND. This all really felt completely canon, and if soma and the other ships were made obviously canon in the show I would expect it to happen the way you wrote this story. Awesome plot, beauftul writing style that I just *kisses fingers* c a n ‘ t.
I will read this again and again and no one can stop me.
Lovely job 3 3

Wow... this is the best soul eater fanfic i ever read... pls keep up the good work! And thx for making me sleep deprived for 2 days :’)

Wow... this is probably the best soul eater fic i ever read... thx for making me sleep deprived for 2 day though :’) ... keep up the good work!

just wanted to say there was no patty x kidd x liz like summery said

That was a LOVELY story. It was so captivating to read! And the best fluff (when it wasn't crazy horror!) ahhh. I loved it so much, and they stayed in character, and I wish they could've had a normal night at the dance..., and.. and... omg. I just remembered the dance. Them throwing all the boys out the window. I just about died. all the antics of capturing and incapacitating these boys. Genius. Great Job.

this is the first soul eater fic I've started. I wanted something realistic and not an AU right off the bat and so far this is delivering! it's well written so I'm excited to continue!

I found this story through your great fanart! I had just finished the anime and found this story as a great continuation to the series finale.
The description and written visuals definitely struck some chords. Felt some things I wasn't expecting to feel with the soul robber (what a great horrifying enemy!) and the gruesome battle scenes. A very nice ending as well. I know this story was started 10 years ago, my main critique while reading was the grammar errors, I loved the story but I was going nuts!

great work

Wew that was intense.

that was awesome.

I love this. I, LOVE this

I'M DYING. Holy crap that was hilarious

i love it! this is so beautiful!