Nice keep this going it’s fucking great

could some one write a story where naruto makes a deal with home in return for a metal version of dead bone pulse the ability to some what easily combine chakra natures and a dojutsu with infrared x-ray and the ability like the byakugan and ability to see blood in the body and control it with minor prediction ability

Disorganized and difficult to fallow.

When are you gonna update Whirlpool wind sage?

Love you fic but do u have a bata and if you do you need to replace them

The 6 Tails a.k.a. the guy you described at the end of this chapter is named Utakata. (I remembered because he's HOT!) Anyways the usual please update. Also, I love your Killer Bee pic. Your a great author and I hope you continue writer!

nice story more please

love it more plz

I really wanted to like this story, but there are WAY too many spelling and grammatical errors that made it exhausting to read just the first chapter and half of the second. Find a beta to read and correct this for you.

yay! Hinata has joined the parade! though I gotta say, most if not all of your Naruto stories have a Naruto who despises Konoha to a powerful level.

Great story keep up the good work

Her name is Fu you idiot.

it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates

guest anonymous
Keep reading bitch. See how all lovey dobey he is with Konoha when he parts ways with them

"He felt a little bad for Tenten but he promised himself to make it up to her."
I knew he will eventually get all lovey dovey with Konoha people later, that ass licker...
Stopped reading there.