You're portraying him as a time traveling demon who didn't get weaker then how he was. But he's still weak enough for nearly everyone to own him? It's interesting but you're obviously going to make him loyal to konoha. The world is bigger than konoha so I don't see why going there is a do or die matter. Demons aren't tolerant people who would take shit because of one people. If you're trying to make him how I think you are, he'd have left konoha with Kushina by now, crippled tsunade and killed everyone who tried to get in his way. Good story but he's a bit naive and weak

I like how it was going up until the last part of this CH, and am sade that you stopped this story.

will you update ?

this story horse shite

6 chapters dude...6!... to finally get to the point. please make 1 chapter of them all. from what I see, those chapters seems to be 1500 -2000 words long. make that 10000 in one awesome prolugue. But I like your writing style.

Man, I loved this. The first 6 chapters where like poetry, I love your writing style so much, too bad that this story is probably never going to be finished. I really liked it.

I'm not sure where this story is going but so far it's really good. Not many people can pull off a story in the first person perspective so well but this story makes it work. Not overly informed but my only complaint is the total amount of speech. But I'll just wait and see if it gets better.

Like the story and look forward to more.

Firstly, this story is pretty good so far, and secondly, it's spelled *Shuriken* and *Kakashi*

I really like the story I'm wonder if you going to make a sequel to this I'm looking forward to seeing it and I like what you did it's actually very nice and very tastefully done so thank you a happy new years and no spiking the egg nog just kidding

So beautifully written. I am enamored with this, if only the author had continued. I can easily say I had high hopes and still do. This is one of the very few time travel fanfics that I actually found that isn't like the others so far and I actually like.

Awesome story I hope you continue

UPDATEEEEEE

This is quite pathetic. Naruto is still far too naive, why is he naive when he is so old? And seriously, how can he not put information together being a shinobi?

Hey! Are you going to continue writing this Story?. 'Cause its very good. I dont have much to say so. Bye!

interesting style of story. i have to say at the start i thought naruto would end up growing up calling himself minato namikaze and all that time travel stuff but now i have no idea what is going to happen and i like it. i especially enjoy how you have shown what ninja's really would be like in times of war, i think that is definately a strong point for this story. i wish you luck with it