Wendersnaven are either God, or bacteria.

He always had somd kind of sixth sense on others mood (except when they were annoyed with him)...

This is absolutely fantastic. Not sure if you are still reading this, but wow! You are a fantastic writer. I also found your art on deviantart, and oh my... you have so much talent

This...is simply absolutely amazing. I really hope that you'll update sometime!

Hi
In advance I apologise for mistakes I will surely make. And my review probably will be a bit chaotic (English also isn't my native language).
I REALLY hope you'll update someday. You're kind of amazing, especially when it comes to dialogues and characters. You put so much life into them 3. And Bishop, oh god... He is creepy and dark, and disturbing and yet so hot (ekhem, or because of that). Though, I disagree with you that in the game he was chaotic neutral (not evil). Wanting to kill everyone, betraying companions for the Great Evil and stuff he says - there're certainly not neutral (quite evil for my tastes x)). Quara is neutral, she doesn't care for sides. She can kill, doesn't really mind it, when she's angry maybe even wants it but in the end she’s approachable and she even cares. She also can betray her companions but it's mostly because of Sand and, well, childishness. Bishop does it, cause he got attached to the KC and he thought of it as a weakness, as leash. Also, they’re all can die for all he cares, especially the one that got him hooked.
Ech, he's so sick 3. And in your story he's even sicker and I love him, honestly :D. He gives me the creeps.
Hmm, I also think that in your story there were unnecessary scenes, especially in the beginning, sometimes too many details in descriptions.
Yeah, but dialogues? Pure genius, seriously. I think I died from laughter couple of times :.
And few times you used Russian syntax.
I know it's been two years already, but please, please, update .

Cheers!
Nadia

Best story EVER, your character skills are phenomenal!

So much for brackets, I only found this story a week ago, have been reading it slowly because I didn't want to finish it. You have done an amazingly fantastic job with everything. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Best story EVER, your character skills are phenomenal!

One year since the last update...
I hope you will find the time to write again someday. Many scenes still make me giggle loudly while rereading for the umpteenth time, the story is just that good.

Oh my gosh I'm in love with this!

Please keep updating! This story gets better every chapter and the characters just keep gaining more and more depth as the story goes on.

I only recently found this story and I am absolutely hooked. There is a good balance of action and comedy that keeps me reading. I absolutely love the back and forth sarcasm between Adele and Bishop. For a person that doesn't speak English as their first language this is amazing. It would be amazing even if English was your first language.

oh well this story is great! Bishop is too much asshole ahahaha! I love him! I hope you want update this story soon!

haha, great banter!

Love it! You have a great writer's voice. Definitely interested in reading more...

I know how you struggled with the court chapter but you have done so well, not letting the chapter be bogged down in boring detail, yet lifting parts of it for closer study.

There is a nice build up of tension through the different point of views and how they observe the spectators. Bishop holding things up by having to dispose of all his weapons had me grinning madly. His struggles against his own emotions brings me endless gleeful joy. We are never as good at lying as when we lie to ourself.

Del is such a wonderful mixture of good person and 'slightly naughty and dangerous'. She is chaotic through and through. Magda and her would make quite a team. Her bardic background comes to the fore here when she ensnares Torio and manipulates the audience. It's nice to see that side of her.

The snappy dialogue is all there and kudos to you for making Torio slightly less of a bimbo. I don't know what they were thinking when they made her. She's supposed to be this mastermind and comes off as pathetically short sighted and stupid, with bad dress sense.

This was a long juicy chapter to keep me going, for a while at least...