Really sweet! I loved it!

loved reading this! D

Perfect story! Simply loved it! His aversion to Maria, the novel itself.

Aw, that was so intense, written excellently .

Maybe you could write more? (Please :D)

xox

Aw serious fluff. really sweet

This was a very sweet story. However, things moved extremely fast. It would have been nice had you slowed the plot down or detailed it more, as I became lost for brief periods throughout. I would also like to point out, that, as Jasper is a southerner, he would not cuss around Alice. Southern boys are taught at a very young age, especially back then, that using any form of profanity, around a lady, is extremely rude, disrespectful, and vulgar.

Although, on a lighter note, I did like your story.

o my that is so sweet i luv jasper the best out of all but i think this is one of the sweetest stories ive read in a while

just beautiful!

this was great

there is simply not enough alice and jasper out there in the fanfic universe :)

I really enjoyed it!... it was really sweet! Alice and Jasper arent often displaying their affection in those ways in the book.. and even though this has nothing to do with the content of the book!... it was a nice insight into how we think of them to be when they are togethr! Nice Job!

nice, i liked it!

This was really sweet. : )

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Ah fluff and smut, there isn't anything better.