Dizzny O'Toon ... haha! love it!

Awesome story, really well written and funny. Tony's comment made me laugh and I needed a good laugh after today, so thanks. :) More?

Both of these comments almost make me falling from my chair or off my chair(I constantly confused with English words and sentences):

1)'Does this guy even live in DC? He gets half the places and locations wrong, and don't get me started on all that junk science that Amy Sutton gets into. Gemcity needs to stop watching CSI and take a tour of a real forensics lab, maybe take a real tour of Virginia and surrounding areas, too.'

2.'Probationary agents should not be allowed to write this stuff. If Rock Hollow were a movie, I'd give it two thumbs, way down! Don't quit your day job, McHack!'

Very funny, loved it! You should write a scene where McGee does something about it

Got a little chuckle out Dizzy's review.A funny little fic.

LOL, that was cute, sounds like something Tony would do too :P

lol, that was way funny especially the very last part, it would be hilarious if they made it a movie

Haha, this was hilarious! Loved Tony's review at the end, that really made the story. :) Thanks for the great read,

Kar, xx

I really loved this little fic, especially the ending with Tony writing the review... very well written too! :)

lol I liked it! Dizzny O' Toon...lol i liked the sn for toNY

lol! this is wonderful!

And I thought I was the only one who always read reviews at Amazon. Too cute! Plus Tony's bit at the end was perfect. Awesome!

That literally made me laugh out loud (my visiting grandparents thought I was cra-zy). And it was so creative - I give it a two thumbs way UP.

LOL that was really good. I think McGee would actually be one to read reviews for his book...

With Dizzny O'Toon, I knew it was Tony right away. LOL, typical of him. I loved this story, seemed very true to character.

haha! i loved it! awesome with the dizzny o'toon. LOL.