This was really good. My favorite of your POTC stories, probably because it was short and sweet but still maintained a recurring theme in each chapter to link it all together. Very well done.

That was beautiful :)

this was good.

How in the world did it jump from Liz masturbating in his bed to them having sex? There was no connection between the two, you just jumped straight into it without the benefit of a story, like you did in the first two chapters.

Wow.

That was...it is indescribable how amazing that was. It was really good especially for your first attempt at M. It wasn't too dirty and just enough rugged romance from the good Cap'n chucked in for good measure.

xx

I loved it. And this was your first M fic? You did a phenomenal job! It was hot, and brilliant. The story was also original, and I loved how it encompassed three different times, in three different time periods that Elizabeth was in the cabin.

I love this story, it's great!

That was wonderful! You have this amazing ability to show in so many ways, through so many things how beautiful they are with each other. They were so natural, so CLOSE in this chapter. This chapter was both sweet, romantic and very passionate. And I loved "“You have to marry me.”" You have Jack's voice SO mastered!

And the entire idea with the cabin, with different moments in time in the same place was really fantastic.

The only thing I don't like about this story is that word "complete" at the top of the page *cries* Please, PLEASE promise you will write another story soon! :)

Wonderful :)

I really enjoyed your story and if you hadn't of made it known that this was the first time you had written a M rated piece I would never have guessed - it was hot! My only critisism would be that Jack was in a bit of a hurry - if you know what I mean. Maybe a little more prep? On the whole though I thought your story well constructed - the first chapter really set up the next two extremely well - well rounded and well written. I love Jack/Elizabeth - I'm off to read the rest of your stories and I hope that you write more soon!

I can't even begin... that was amazing! It was sweet and tender yet hot and passionate at the same time!

I love this story, please update soon! It's fantastic and uniquely Sparrabeth!

Happy New Year!

Hugs,

Anna

I like the two chapters you posted so far they show the depth of Lizzie's emotions for Jack.

Excellent chapter! :)

It was SO wonderful to see that you updated! Even though it took me 25 minutes to open this chapter lol (I'm spending my Christmas break in a very small village in the mountains and my internet connection is dreadfully weak here )

I love the image of Elizabeth in the beginning, and the phrase "too tired to sleep" was just so perfect. I love how you're always able to show the state of a character's mind in so many ways, through their gestures, their looks, their actions.

It's awesome how you link the chapters, the scenes, those moments in time, tying them up with books - I love how Elizabeth finds a sense of familiarity in them.

The tossing of the book was FABULOUS! I love those precious details, little scenes that you never forget to add, enriching every scene with them.

Jack? The Beast? No LOL I love the thoughts running through Elizabeth's head, all the callbacks to the scenes from your other stories. It's so much JOY to recall them in this context.

The entire last part was really fantastic, fantastically emotional and very elegantly written.

And I loved the recurring "an impossible man" phrase interlaced with the narration of that scene... it was BRILLIANT.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one! :)

(Now I'm off to spend another 25 minutes trying to submit this review lol)

Thank you so much for updating! It was a great Christmas present! :)

OH A new story from you! :D

This is an awesome story idea, I love it!

"Oh, Captain, she sighed. Are we to both be victims to the same man?" - I love Elizabeth's voice in this. And Jack's log entries - perfect! They sound SO like him!

And I adore all the Shakespeare references :)

Can't wait to read more! I hope that you will update VERY SOON! :) This is WONDERFUL!