Now this is a story we can be inspired by.

this story is oh, so sweet. thank you!

love it hate that you killed her mom but she needde to be out of the way love how it turned out especialy the nauty bits not a lot of people write it like that where they get a little raunchy

Bwah! *cries*

You killed her mommy!

*cries on pillow*

Sorry, death of mother is a problem with me...

It was well written though ;u;

GOOD JOB!

i like it

i know it made me blush at some parts,

but i really did like it

will you write more soon

Very lovely fanfiction. hope you'll write some more of these kind.

A little naughty, and a bit vague, but sweet, nonetheless.

Nice job.