a really wonderful story

I finally finished this wonderful story and all your other NCIS stories as well. I am very sorry to hear about your loss, you've been through any parent's-including me- worst nightmare. My sympathies to you and your family. You are a great storyteller and I think that you should redstart writing again. I would like to see new McGee stories from you.. Courage, my friend. I'm sending virtual hugs to you..

As always McGee is quick about forgiving Tony. I know from personal experience that the more easily you forgive people, the more you get stepped on. But this is your story so I guess that I'll just let it slide and hope that Tony really does everything to show that he earns that forgiveness.

My friend, it's been six years since you finished this story and I'm sorry that I had just found your page while in house confinement because of Covid-19 but I'm glad I did. I'm a huge McGee fan myself and I love all kind of McGee fanfics. Although I liked all your stories, this one is probably my favorite. Tony and Abby were my least favorite characters and they are thankfully gone from the show, but not fast enough. Although they matured in time, they still tortured Tim for more than a decade and I never understood why the scenarists found harassing, belittling and mocking the same character over and over was funny, and they still do it sometimes. Trust Tony to mock Tim again and tell all kind of unpleasant things about him and his feelings. The headslaps the others gave him were such a pleasure to read but still not enough, I would prefer him getting punched in the face ! I'm glad that at least-and at last-Gibbs decided to support Tim in this.

Wonderful story!

love it

A good story

awesome, awesome, awesome. love the story and the concept. cant wait to read more of your work.

Awesome! Never read a daddy!McGee fic.-read one where Tim starts to have a life outside the team and is with a lady who leaves after the miscarriage that was caused by a car accident that also killed her mother. Never read one where it was all about daddy!McGee but I want to read more now!

Well done. I enjoyed this very much

Awesome, thank you!

This was such a beautiful story. I think you took a hard, complex concept and made it incredibly belivable when I honestly had my doubts that you (or anyone, really) could. Loved reading McGee's journey to fatherhood. The very beginning with Tony's knee-jerk reaction, the first failed adoption attempt, Tim's friend, to Tim finally finding his baby… There was so much here to love. Thank you for writing this. Can't wait to see what story you come up with next.

Happy Days

That was an adorable story! Thanks for sharing it. :)

Loved it. :)

I'm glad he moved into a house.