I wish you'd continue this. It's pretty good! :)

oh my God.

that was...that was just messed up. Bella's home life is the stuff that you read about in newspapers when a story is done on abused children...that was messed up.

well, at least Edward seems to care, even if he denies it. at least he's sweet to her (tucking her in: that's just adorable)

Please pretty please continue this story. I really love it so far.

~EvE

i was just wondering if you were going to continue this story? i would really like to read more!

i figure you probably wont be updating... but i loved what youve got :)

Please update soon! :)

LOL!

Love it! you should totally continue this!

W.O.W.

This is god! I don't understand how you wrote this well! haha! i love it! so much! great job on this stoty! i hope you can update soon! :)

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Great story can't wait for more chapters

so awesome. great job

I really like this story and can not wait to read more of it! I have read a lot of stories and this one is different(in a good way)from the rest of them! I like the store line! I hope to see another chapter really soon!

I love this story! For something you could do in the future is have someone insult Bella in public then have edward defend her and she realizes she loves him and he loves her. But have a lot of twiss and unexpecting things to keep the story more entertaining. Keep writing and update soon!

Hey whats up i love this story you should really update this story cause i wanna know what update soon.

Aloha

Brie

Man that was long!

~Nicole

wow, i just adore this fanfic, it's full of so much emotion, i hope you update soon.